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- Maokami1mthCommenté
This aged well
My glorious blue eyed king Goatjo tucked SleepKuna in to bed and made him see tweety birds 💀 It was crazy how after all that trash talk Sukuna was chatting he couldn't take a heavenly backshot from Gojo - Maokami1mthPosté
- Maokami1mthRépondu à CookieHoarder
It’s thor
Goddamn it, stop blushing! - Maokami1mthRépondu à Potatowned
That’s literally his first kill, go back and read
I knew, intellectually, that I'd had no choice, that killing that man was self-defense. I'd thought I was ready. And in a sick way, I was proud that I'd managed to kill him. But the look in his eyes, the feel of his blood against my skin, knowing I'd killed someone, it left feeling empty. - Maokami5mthRépondu à ArifuretaForever
yeah, The harem part is a big issue on this site. too many stories use the same excuse that. the harem isn't the main focus. or I'm gonna write it better. or the harem is small. dude harems by themselves only work in a small amount of settings. if you want a harem go old Republic. atless then you could have been a sith and it would make sense. dude, i won't say you are bad. but stop with the harem, no one wants a wish fulfilment story that is just about getting pokemon wives
- Maokami8mthPosté
- Maokami8mthCommentéJacob, that was my name, I was a landscaping apprentice, ready to do anything, having just passed my driving test the world was finally open to me, and yet I died, that wasn't how it was supposed to go, I was making money, I had a little car that would take me wherever I needed to go, and yet that very same car blew the fu*k up, WITH ME IN IT. Why.
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so, why harem? This story would flow much better without every hot female character getting dicked down, because they found the mc hot. just one would have worked. So instead of the trying to write around the idea of multiple love interest. take that one and instead travel with it. thank you for you're time.
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THERE WILL ONLY BE A YES TO THIS
Second Sister (Star wars) - Maokami1yrCommenté
devil trigger
Author Rant: Now I have run into a problem, I can't figure out a name for Dante's force and I can't keep calling it 'the force' every time so I need suggestions. - Maokami1yrCommentéCh 5 4 Call me Daddy~
- Maokami1yrRépondu à LuciusAgares
she is in it, but during the second season
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dude, imma be honest. you sometime forget about spacing or spelling
Ce livre a été supprimé. - Maokami1yrCommentéCh 6 Chapter Six
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