Praxes1245

Your novel is so cliche, in the future chapters, can you avoid repetitive plots? Its just ruining the story man.

I thought the english grammar would be good since the Author is an Indian. Its just basic english grammar

I guess you are the same with me. Too much angst on this story. I guess to keep the readers being hype

Why put so much emphasis on another book. Should focus more on the development of this story instead of referencing to others. Im really confused

My head hurts on the grammatical errors

This type of troupe is already overused by so many novels that i read. I thought this is a unique one.

What chapter did he grow up? Im still on Chapter 160 and he is still 12 years old.

I thought this was fast paced since it was only around 400 chapters. I am already in chapter 160 and the MC is still 12 years old. This is really getting on my nerves.

Is the story still dissapointing?i might as well stop while its early to avoid wasting my time

Will, it will become dull since it sucks to be lonely only fighting for himself. Wven