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its build like a classic superman movie theres nothing new other than him having eternal parent and the story is going like it did to dc instead of lex luthor theres justin hammer wo is a exact replica of lex and superman himself is unbelievable naive its a great story but not for me

so gar the Story does Not deviate from the original Just the Name of the MC ist new but His Action are the Same as in the orginal

Its refreshing to see a story thats this good i hope to see more updates until this story is finished i would like to say please dont stop writing isee so many storys that are chinese translations lately that i became sick of them this is good

I Think you should do a time skip where he finishes school and do a Crossover with fast and the Furious Just an idea

Look i Like the Story Idea the Charakter developement and would Like to ready the Story until IT ends good Work

thank you for your review i think about overgoing my Story and rewrite it

i try but this is my Seconds Story and English ist Not my first language i will become better with other Storys and the more i Writer thank you for Reading

Just Enjoy the Story

nothin i Just Like to include it

Maybe. English isn´t my first Langue because of that i am Describing it really vaguelly i try to learn in the process and maybe in the future i will write another cyberpunk story different this time