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HeartRend10 days agoCommentégreat chat, nice to see other perspectives
- HeartRend2 months agoCommenté
Ty for chapter!
- HeartRend3 months agoRépondu à Ilovenovel
Honestly if he does then I quit. What’s the point of becoming so much stronger than a campione if u can’t even beat anyone?
- HeartRend4 months agoCommenté
nice time skip, ty. Hopefully this doesn't devolve too much into smut, and focuses more on the plot.
- HeartRend4 months agoPosté
Great progress and update schedule. I would say the charachter development is a little lacking, as ther personality shift of the MC is a bit fast/extreme. Still pretty good and feels good to fine a Campione fanfic with an OC main charachter - Goudo was just too beta for my liking for someone with that much power.
- HeartRend4 months agoCommenté
+1
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Ugh kinda annoying how much MC is protecting or favouring Xiao Guy
- HeartRend5 months agoCommenté
Ty for chap. Hopefully he actually kills and finished the problem at once instead of letting him go just to come back again
- HeartRend5 months agoCommenté
+1
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