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Hotarla

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  • Hotarla
    Hotarla7 days ago
    Répondu à punzygracy

    It was fun lol, I didn’t mind organizing things. I’m a bit OCD that way lol.

  • Hotarla
    Hotarla7 days ago
    Répondu à punzygracy

    No problem, I’ll do it if it ever comes up! I’ve helped out another author in this kinda way on Webnovel before too lol. The author was being overwhelmed by all her characters and their physical features kept changing. So, I offered to make a google doc of all the characters just to help her get organized. 😂 I was bored, and it was fun! Lol

  • Hotarla
    Hotarla7 days ago
    Répondu à punzygracy

    Ah, what I meant was the chapter progression should be “Rip it Off”, “In Heat”, then “Punishment”. I thought you might’ve mixed the chapters around because “In Heat” starts off with MC remarking about the “ripping off” comment from the “Rip it Off” chapter. Also, ”Punishment” referred to a second kiss when there wasn’t a first kiss yet. Lol

  • Hotarla
    Hotarla7 days ago
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    Love your writing! I found you on Chereads first and decided to look for it here as well. Btw, did you mess up the order of the last two chapters? The story progression doesn’t match! 😅

  • Hotarla
    Hotarla21 days ago
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    The plot thickens! Wonder what’s going to happen next! I’m so excited! Just a few minor questions: Althea was also addressed as Morgana. Is that also her name? Also, I’ve noticed some inconsistencies in eye color lol. Althea has violet eyes but now she’s mentioned to have gold eyes. Previously, there was also a part where Kael had blue eyes while other times it was gold. 😅 Not sure if that’s a typo or if they change colors when they’re using their powers lol. Just thought you ought to know! Either way, thanks for the update!

  • Hotarla
    Hotarla21 days ago
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    A hero’s quest! And here I thought this was just going to be a BL romcom! It’s like those stories where a band of heroes goes out to kill the demon lord! Still though, I had to back read back to the previous chapter lol, I have a bad memory when it comes to names. 😂

  • Hotarla
    Hotarla21 days ago
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    Woww so many new characters, I can’t remember them all! But I guess now we have a bit more backstory lol! Although…two different clans of vampires? I’m assuming one is leader of all vampires and one is the leader for the vampires who guard the royal vampires?

  • Hotarla
    Hotarlaa month ago
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    Thank you for updating Maya! I really enjoyed these chapters! Although maybe you should add an extra #r18 tag, just in case, both here and Chereads. Just in case! I know some writers have use those tags as well. PS: I’m all for the smutty times! 😉 *licks lips* I eat them for breakfast, lunch and dinner! *slurpppp* 😜

  • Hotarla
    Hotarlaa month ago
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    Me, definitely not crying her eyes out and wasting tissues: QnQ

  • Hotarla
    Hotarlaa month ago
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    Oh Kael bby, denial is a real b*t...bummer. I hope you can get back into Theron's good graces soon. Although really, Lirien finding out before the parents? Hoo boy. 😅 Now she's gonna be the lamp post between two different couples lol. Thx for the update Maya!