Taoist_Ouroboros

yes add smut

i understand why this is r18 but u r basically doing most of the work and not finishing it so either go all the way or remove the smut tag. hope this helps

oh my god im so happy i thought it had been dropped

omg please let him access all his meta knowledge like he had at the start cause this is driving me crazy that he has the answer to his problems but his not using them

so frustrating that he doesn't or cant use meta knowledge properly anymore if he has no meta knowledge I could move on but considering he has such detailed meta-knowledge which he suddenly cant use is driving me a bit crazy

why doesn't he constantly keep looking at his dc memories He had lots of specific knowledge at the start and now he cant even recognise robin and posing ivy which is putting him at a disadvantage. he properly has forgotten about the court of owls which he could have delt which at this point if he just looked at his memories

Good. im seeing some negative comments about it but I don't think they realise that this is a translation and lets face it if u read a lot of translations u get used to their style but someone new to them will just see bad quality writing and not give any a chance. what is the orginal name of this translated novel ????????

so sad was looking foward to her getting railed :)

by the way i see a lot of comments mentioning how u should focous on action and dropp romance and in the end its your choice but i really like that u includes romace (especialy 18+) and that it adds depth to the character and allows for some chill chapters.

1 stick with your plan i think that cause u keep over explainning that she was a man in the past life its putting people off. she was a man now she is a girl lets move on and mentioning it less i mean its not going to be a core part of her character right? as she is not going to base all her choices on being a man in his previous life