BIGGRA

what is the raw's name?

Oh Most Illustrious and Supreme Evoxius, we beseech thee to recover with the strength of a thousand suns and the vigor of an immortal quill-wielding deity! May your hands remain ever supple, untouched by the cruel grasp of fatigue, so that we, your humble devotees, may once again feast upon the divine magnificence of your storytelling. May no ailment dare stand in the way of your literary brilliance, and may your keyboard tremble in anticipation of your triumphant return!

I think the introspection you're writing is great but you may be overdoing it. It would be better if it was spaced out instead of multiple chapters saying essentially the same things to different people

I feel like the mc is pretending to be mysterious and smart instead of being it. Its like the author is trying to cram years of character development into a couple of chapters and it comes of as insincere

I came here just to comment how i absolutely DESPISE this kind of plot. He had ample time to become a absolute powerhouse but the plot forces him to skip 1000 years with some BS logic. Just for him to follow the original plotline. This shows that the story is going to be sh**t. The author can't make his own interesting plot point so he uses some Bs and treats the audience like they're toddlers

Well written romance, i only wish they were a little older. It would give you much more ways to write the romance but i understand to have patience. Also it's impressive to make Azula likeable without changing her core personality

It seems like the mc genius is being nerfed. To go from weak genin to middle of chunin in a couple of months, but only go from middle to strong chunin in two whole years is massively slower. I'm sure shisui and itachi had this growth rate and he's supposed to be better than them.

I understand that he doesn't want 40k people dead who may or may not be innocent, or the rest of world and i agree to stopping that. but this is a retaliation in an ongoing war started by the fire nation, the aggressor, that has been going for almost a 100 years with probably tens of millions of casualties. He should be aware of this fact and so to render only "justice" to those 8 terrorist and not the fire nation seems hypocritical. Even if he can't fight the fire nation head on, I'm sure he can do something meaningful or atleast not help them overtly.

Like many have pointed out. Listening to your reader almost never works out. The only time would be if you made a mistake on a name, power or object. Aside from that always follow your own ideas, even if it doesn't work out it will still be yours.

I feel like the mc is in over his head, he clearly doesn't know enough about the different political dynamics going on and yet he is killing someone over it. I don't know whether this is deliberate by the authro, since it's kind of going against his usual character