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re reading, as i stopped for a period, and the one thing that confuses me about this chapter is he never summons his mum, is there a reason for that? if it ruins the a story plot don't tell just say yeah there is

Have you read Herald of the Stars - A Warhammer 40k, or Praise the Omnissiah ? both are still updating , though Herald hasn't had a chapter in a month, but its expected as the author went on holidays. If not check them out not on webnovel though, Herald of the stars is on Royal road and Praise is on Spacebattles, both I would say are better than this, not saying this is bad, but I don't truly believe this captures the true Grimdark aspect of 40K

Well translated, Updates are going strong, World background is 40k pretty easy if you are a 40k fan. Character design is good as well. As a translator I think Zaelum is doing a great job, this ticks most of my 40k boxes, only thing i wish the original author woul;d of done is truly capture shear size of things, Most people if you tell them something is 8km long or there are a billion people plus living somewere, wont really be able to imagine it, purely because we don't have a size comparison to compare it to. Also I feel like this novel is more on the light side of the grimdark nature of 40K, it really doesn't catch the true nitty gritty parts of it, it tries but it falls short for me. Over all i recommend this to any 40k fan, just don't expect it to be as grimdark as 40k universe truly is, but it does give it a go ( nothing really on webnovel to compare it to, probably the best I have seen on webnovel other than I don't want to be a tin can, but that is no longer updating)

I really get confused with the timing of this novel, basically its saying hes raided the snakes lair, also got Lockhart fired, and published a paper in less than 2 months.... I hope time speeds up as the MC is becoming way to OP so early on.

I really believe that there is a misunderstanding here, Fiendfyer doesn't only rely on charms it requires exceptional skill which the MC has but its also needs a lot of concentration which this MC doesn't have as his will is 2, and lastly a deep understanding of dark magic which if i recall is still 2 at this point.

dafuck isn't he putting anything in will?

I really hope that he isn't brought into the Original plot to much, I like him doing his own things its been refreshing, The original plot, though i love, its not the reason i read fan fictions, I just want more stories based in the world, The magical world is so much bigger than harry potter.

for fucks sake.... Please don;t take this down I am a trainer BS, its fine to have it but focus on the breeding, why do so many novels do this they start on the things i actually want to see and all end up being BAM its all about the pew pew. ...[img=Your move]

I like how you explained the blur the lines with his soul, more detailed explanation compared to some authors who just shrug it of as left over urges, then making a stupid oath that some how stops them then with a ease on there soul... sigh

I hope these type of chapters don't happen to much, I am probably just gonna skip them