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Avatinius

Avatinius

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2017-04-13 JointGlobal
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius5mth
    Commenté

    I don't usually comment. but it's very boring when you focus on a side char for this long.

    Ch 194 Chapter 194
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    One Piece : My Revenge
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Anfractuous
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius1yr
    Commenté

    a lovely read. Great job, author

    Ch 11 Weird protagonist brain screw
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    The Heroine Eavesdropped on My Voice Heart
    Anime et bandes dessinées · DogLickerGods
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius1yr
    Commenté

    don't get me wrong... if it's only those listed on the quest list, it should only take 15minutes..

    It took me a total of two hours to finish this training.
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    World Travel System: High School Dxd ,Naruto etc.
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Boss_Ace
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté

    eh, no idea for romantic thingy. I did like the op healer girl

    Ch 14 Death in Paradise: Chapter 14
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    Second Coming Of Gluttony: The Shadow of Death
    Anime et bandes dessinées · TAKEN
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté

    poor guy

    Ch 13 Death in Paradise: Chapter 13
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    Second Coming Of Gluttony: The Shadow of Death
    Anime et bandes dessinées · TAKEN
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Posté

    I gave it 5/5 for the numbers sake, but if I truthfully gave it a score, perhaps 4.5/5. this novel / fanfic is an enjoyable read, I do like the main character, the plot is good and what I enjoy a lot is that the author doesn't mind straying away from the manga/novel plots, which I truly enjoy reading about. Tbh, if I wanted to read something that only follows the plot of a novel / manga, then I would have read that manga / novel, not a fanfiction. all in all, kudos to you, Author.

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    In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)
    Anime et bandes dessinées · BlackStar_BH
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté

    I usually don't comment or review, but this time, I'll do it. honestly speaking, I am enjoying this novel, a lot. kudos to you, author. I do hope that you will continue writing, as it isn't easy to find good novels / fanfics as of late.

    Ch 16 Chat Again! The First Dimensional Mission!
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    In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)
    Anime et bandes dessinées · BlackStar_BH
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Posté

    I've finally finished reading the raws, I'm not gonna comment on the writing quality either on this website nor on the raws, as raws are usually bad writing quality. I honestly enjoyed the overall feeling of the novel, there are some stuff I'm slightly bitter about but nothing too big or much. Rosen (mc) / Crocodile as a character worked really well into the story, and the story had him as a main focus and didn't set focus on Straw Hats (which I liked that the focus was only on Crocodile). As One Piece isn't finished yet, the author had to make his own twist, which worked pretty well, and the author changed some parts into the story too. all in all, a really enjoyable read.

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    One Piece : I Am Really Crocodile ?
    Anime et bandes dessinées · SLIKOH
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 81 Chapter-80<Finale-5>
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    Solo Player Arvin
    Fantaisie · Aladin666
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté

    as another guy said, I'm reading without commenting due to loving this novel too much

    Ch 33 Chapter-32<Call of Tower>
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    Solo Player Arvin
    Fantaisie · Aladin666
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté

    why read it more than once? if he has as good as memory as he said, he wouldn't need to read or see anything more than once

    Arvin looked at the description of the skill and read it over and over again. He wanted to understand what this skill is all about and he wanted to learn its limitations and strengths. Still, after reading about the description of the skill, Arvin had many questions regarding the skill…
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    Solo Player Arvin
    Fantaisie · Aladin666
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté

    noice

    Ch 12 Chapter-11<A God name Lopt?>
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    Solo Player Arvin
    Fantaisie · Aladin666
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Posté

    loved reading the trial. I wonder when it will be published at normal rates. and, does anyone know where I could find the raws for this novel?

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    MMORPG: I Can See Hidden Information
    Bandes dessinées et romans graphiques · Hong Chen Qian Zhang
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté
    "F*ck it!"
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    MMORPG: I Can See Hidden Information
    Bandes dessinées et romans graphiques · Hong Chen Qian Zhang
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté
    Ch 196 The People of Bellvia
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    The Ancients World
    Bandes dessinées et romans graphiques · easyread
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté

    loving this novel so far

    Ch 31 Chapter 31 Free Surfing!
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    One Piece: My Infinity Gauntlet!
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Levaa
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius2yr
    Commenté

    Child Of Destiny

    Ce paragraphe a été supprimé.
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    I Am an Evil Lord Yet, Why Are They Happy to Serve Under Me?
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Zimrence
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius3yr
    Posté

    im giving it 5 star. I'm at chapter 60 or so currently whilst writing this review. so far I'm enjoying the story, it might be a tad confusing at times (the very few chapters, and around where I'm at now), but just continue reading and everything will be explained in a matter of chapters or you'll naturally figure it out by yourself. so my advice is, don't drop out due to being confused at times, as it will only last a chapter or two before everything makes sense again. what I also want to know, will there be romance in this novel? as it kinda does foreshadow a female character that might return, + other fangirls of the MC.

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    Marine’s Dark Admiral (by High Fever 36 Degrees)(complete)
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Franxiscus_Siregar
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius3yr
    Commenté

    what is this intro?! I need to know his looks, his eye colour, his lung capacity, how long his hair is, how much hair he grows daily, how pale his skin is, how much blood he has in his body, how fast he can blink, how fast he can react, how much muscles he has and so on! so many things that isn't in this intro! he's not a special mc at all!!! btw, this is just a sarcastic comment if you didn't get it :)

    "I will come back later, so until then, have fun!" After those words, she went to touch the button on the side of the helmet and waited a few moments before leaving the young man alone.
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    Cultivation Online
    Bandes dessinées et romans graphiques · MyLittleBrother
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  • Avatinius
    Avatinius3yr
    Répondu à StrayGod

    I'll keep my eyes open up for season 2, can't wait for it :) author, you're doing great, don't give up and continue to growing better at writing

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    One Piece: Transmigrated with Beyblades (On Hiatus)
    Anime et bandes dessinées · StrayGod
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