Excellent story, looking forward to more, Ps: always thought itachi needed shanking where the sun don't shine. 👍😁

Looks pretty good, still quite early on but I'm looking forward to reading more, so congrats you've just earned a reader 👍👍😁😁

Ay don't worry about it, most people who complain about a person's language skills have never bothered to even try and learn a new language so don't let it get you down, just write what makes you happy and try to enjoy the experience!

Sounds interesting, looking forward to seeing where tou take the story. 👍👍

No cliffhanger ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!! !!!! !! Owh the suspense is killing me. Well played sir, well played 👍😁😁

Sounds like an interesting premise, looking forward to seeing what you do with it.

School has to come first mate, get yourself sorted so that you can schedule time to do your lessons and your homework and then timetable moments that you can write in comfortably without making your life hell, but most of all keep your chin up, and have a good time with it all. Good luck and God bless.

Well cheers, Reading this made me laugh for the first time in a couple of days, I needed that.

You son of a gun, that was a damn fine set up, my heart leapt into my mouth and took a solid minute to climb back out again, so bravo you managed to scare me sh*tless!

Really fun read, would recommend for anyone who is a fan of the self-insert genre, or game of thrones.

God damn now I really want to know what he'd found