OllieZ

You are sometimes not translating Tyler and Amy's Chinese names

Making a story being the twin brother of Daenerys is very hard to do, as Daenerys destiny is simply too overbearing to make her a side character. If you go along with her destiny, you basically are rehashing canon and making a background character, if not, the MC has to outshine her and make even more incredible things just to be on par with her. Another option is to take over Dany's destiny or make her the final boss to defeat.

I would be very dissapointed if Petyr comes out alive, something very OOC for the MC. It is a pet peeve of mine when OP MC's leave mastermind-like characters alive just for their amusement.

By the way, MC as a local, cousin marriages or crushes wouldn't carry much of a stigma.

My initial thought is to never leave an Mastermind-type antagonist alive, especially someone who doesn't even need to be strong, like Danzo, who can simply use reputation and relationship (with other ROOT members, Hiruzen and the other Elders) as a weapon. But I will wait to see how you handle a crippled Danzo.

Wow what a nice comment! Keep it up :D

Thanks for the chapter. Loving the arc

You call it smart, but it is also cowardice/bully behaviour. Every big dragon acts the same, not wanting to be injured for nothing, but they don't target hatchlings and eggs. He is only the fiercest in that context, but not in fighting and defeating similar-sized dragons.

I agree that Cannibal would be the hardest to tame, as he has always been wild and he is very old already. But he isn't fierce, he always escapes fights that can harm him, and only hunts hatchlings, when they grow a bit, he doesn't even try