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Wouldn't be good to let people to read like 20-30 chapters in order to see if they get hooked? I can't even read chapter 1 since it's asking me to pay, but while i like worldbuilding i'm not sure to spent 10 dolars for something i don't know if it's good enough, it may be different if i had read some of your work before but i didn't.

Are you telling me the author doesn't even know he should allow to read a couple of chapters to hook?

She is really too kind, she belived him and is even helping him this much without reason.

He said he was summoned, but he didn't say from where so even if she were to belive him (That she should not) it would be hard for her to understand he doesn't know magic and he didn't ask so is nor really the moment to explain that.

The bandits kidnapped him and danced in front of the sliming puting others at risk and still decided to forgive them, saved them and even then recruit them despite his own party objetions and the damage on the soldiers moral and loyalty, which means the risk of having those outweighed the advantages too.

And yet, Lucas could see him with no trouble.

Prolly in the same way Junior ended being the highest level on the team despite her sickness and not being in front while she have to be more careful of when using magic.

It's a serpent, not a vampire. Don't go killing and reviving the serpent just like that. Plus, why the wyvern care about human favor? Also. Humands can't breed with monkeys why could with dragons? one thing is to go and make elves and dwards who at least looks like, but dragons is an other thing. Maybe, droping a drop of blood on a person to give them dragon like powers and stuff is fine, but isn't going too much a child? Is the author making a excuse to why could be useful to bring the duchess with ash when he previously said it was too much of a problem? For that he should just have keep the marriage thing even if saving the merchant guild. I'm starting to think Ash is responsable for the future where the duchy and the alien gods to destroy the empire.

Considering he decided to not accept empire influence and even reject the other kingdom marriage union even thought the second thing wasn't directly related with the empire or the other kingdom influence while even trying to reclute the most wanted duchesse who is paramont to end a war it doesn't really seems like he care about the other kingdom much thought.

Interesting idea, but also means that it would be easy to raise multielemental mages for your war making them not so rare.