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striker4515dRépondu à bitwareEgyptian goddess of life and magic
"Alright, now that everyone is here, August, give me an explanation. Where did you find this woman? Don't think Isis forgiving you means I'll let you off."- striker4516dCommentéCh 130 DxD 0130: Spell Compression
- striker4517dCommenté
cringe for villian
It could be more true if not for My single drop of Nosebleed. - striker4517dPosté
Well writing review after a long while anyway. It has wack prologue i have ever seen from multiple POV changes (some of which are of random side characters) to 4th wall breaks to flashbacks in future timeline. Overall it was really weird close to none flow in the story It was getting interesting around chapter 18 but it's paid after 20 and I'm not really invested to continue reading. Hope you progress in your writing bro.
- striker4517dCommentéCh 17 QNA-2@(A/N)
- striker4517dCommentéCh 13 The Arrival of Angels~*
- striker4517dCommenté
sounds like cuck MC
She must have been forced by someone or something! - striker4524dCommenté" And? He wanted to kill someone else but got killed, that's his skill issue... Haven't you heard? Don't think of killing others if you are afraid of dying, " Bai Lung's grandfather muttered loudly while his saliva spits into patriarch Li's face.
- striker4529dRépondu à DivineLycoris12Sakura didn't respond for a few seconds, "Dickhead," She cursed, "couldn't even tell me that he's coming back."
- striker4530dCommenté
wow what a disappointment it was a really intriguing story so far I was looking forward to fighting with Voldemort. Had to go ahead and throw it down the drain. Not really interested in reading how his women married different people had kids and he still forgives them.....
Ch 36 Sleeping - striker451mthCommenté
aww poor girl
At most, letting him hug her... That's pretty much how most university couples are anyway! - striker451mthCommentéIn the novel there should be incest, harem, and netori.
- striker451mthRépondu à Zailo95
fallen angel
I thank them and they give me a room. When it's bedtime, Akeno comes to me, and I feel like I heard the door being locked. Akeno says she wants to sleep next to me. And yes, I understood why Akeno is sadistic; her mother makes baraqiel crying. It felt like I heard a whip. - striker451mthCommenté
well she has trauma after her father leaves bro.....
Akeno becomes teary-eyed and hugs me. - striker451mthCommenté
this drastic change in personality came from nowhere, at least show some dialogue between characters for some emotional progression
Hmm, more training. I'm starting to get bored. At least I can spend time with Rias. - striker452mthCommenté
so edgelord mc got it
Next, I dislocated my shoulder and put it back in its place to track the signals of pain my neurons are carrying right now. I did this so I could check if I'm in some hallucinatory state where I'm seeing things. - striker452mthCommenté
used to play everyday till it got banned. still play when friends ask
AN: A quick question. How many of you play Mobile Legends? Why? Because I'm thinking of adding a MOBA System for my next Harry Potter FF. So, I need to know how many of you are familiar with the game. [Don't ask for the release date.] - striker453mthCommenté
yup
2. Titanic fanfic, smashing Winslet, saving our little bro jack. More of wish fulfilment. Normal paced. - striker453mthRépondu à Verethragna74
she was in multiple wars
What did you expect .....it's an AU and my Tsunade isn't a Dumbass, she is going to be a badass and reach bigger heights.detailMinato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your DaddyAnime et bandes dessinées · Life_sa_Beach_ - striker453mthCommentéCh 39 ANNOUNCEMENT