MikeN

That tail swish indicates zoomies might happen at the most unexpected moment.

Just move the hair color back before the comma right after his height. Everything personal should be in the first clause and everything about clothes should be after.

Why does the robe have hair? Grammar check...

That depends entirely on the setting or environment. How many dark organizations are recruiting violently? How many government agencies are looking for people with special powers? How many battle fanatic cultivators are there just looking for their next great challenge? How many monsters are eating powerful cultivators to level up?

Evil Cultivation techniques usually absorb others energy. Very, very painfully.

Not necessarily. His Flawless state might not have that 'Flaw'. When he tries to slow down by losing his yang, it will just be another first.

Increasingly, in this novel, humans are just pet delivery people.

Frost Resistance generates more and more flowers as proficiency rises. I think they're referring to burning off its resistance flowers.

Now...Is this MC another Ash? Will he get hypnotized too?

The delivery guy doubles as the Tamer with the pet with Hypnosis...