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Young Justice: The black super soldier

Auteur: Tjsmith1202
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What is Young Justice: The black super soldier

Lisez le roman Young Justice: The black super soldier écrit par l'auteur Tjsmith1202 publié sur WebNovel. This is my first fan fiction so let's get into it this will be a self insert and my vision for my story on young justice with me only owning my MC with him having the super solider serum from marvel's...

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This is my first fan fiction so let's get into it this will be a self insert and my vision for my story on young justice with me only owning my MC with him having the super solider serum from marvel's Captain America with him having a high intellect of the young justice universe and in all aspects of him being the smartest man in the young justice universe with a small harem that I already have in mind so sit back and enjoy the fan fiction.

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yodo_
yodo_Lv1yodo_

The story is too cringe.

B0r3d_Guy_1
B0r3d_Guy_1Lv13B0r3d_Guy_1

cool concept poor writing. Spelling, punctuation and grammer is basically non existent and makes it hard to read.

Dcelano
DcelanoLv4Dcelano

Révéler le spoiler

StromLantern
StromLanternLv5StromLantern

Couldn't read past chapter one, the spelling and grammar, sentence structure, everything is just wrong with this one, give it a pass until the Author gets it edited.

SS_Ozymander
SS_OzymanderLv2SS_Ozymander

no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no

1_Am_A_New_God
1_Am_A_New_GodLv31_Am_A_New_God

the writing is awful, and why is a WAR HERO on a team of teenagers instead of the Justice League 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

Mikemaiku
MikemaikuLv13Mikemaiku

I haven’t read the story but all the reviews are low star for no real reason other it’s a harem. I personally don’t like them either but that doesn’t mean it’s bad and you shouldn’t leave a bad review because of it. Unless it’s done bad and you express that instead of just saying “Harem bad I don’t like one star. So this is to help balance it out and give the author some encouragement. Hopefully the story is at least ok or I’ll sound stupid

The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4The_man_The_myth

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhjh nasty harem story gross

Fuck_You_2730
Fuck_You_2730Lv1Fuck_You_2730

Merda . Simplesmente isso . Nem parece que lá autor está realmente tentando , mesmo fábrica que só são escritas para passar o tempo não são tão ruins quanto essa !

AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv4AspiringPedo

I like the concept, its cool, but the execution is just plain horrible. The grammar is subpar, the story telling is not the best, to be honest, it just sounds like a summary and not the actual story. And the character himself, despite having the same background as mcu captain america, which is also debatable by the way, just sounds off everytime he talks for some reason, its like he’s trying to flex that he’s a “war hero” most of the time. He just doesn’t sound like captain America but instead a fan wearing his suit trying too hard to be him….. Overall i think the concept is good but the story itself is bad. Like you could have gone over his time in WW2 where he met Wonder Woman (im pretty sure she fought in WW2) and such and such before he got frozen in ice, there could have been a whole prologue before the actual story started! And the reactions to his return are just lacklusteer! They dont even know him so he has to introduce himself most of the time, like that bright a** shield aint a dead giveaway! And when they finally know who he is, there’s just a slight widening of the eye😂

GreenDrago
GreenDragoLv4GreenDrago

People complain about harem and then go to it for no reason lol

Dao_8teh
Dao_8tehLv4Dao_8teh

Very interesting concept but grammar and character development and even adding some slice of life moments to break up the action. Overall it should also have some background story and lore elements. Also keep writing and check for any mistakes and improvements.

Tjsmith1202
Tjsmith1202AuteurTjsmith1202

Had to do this since I am the author of this story 😊

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