Unusual world

Hi guys author here just wanted to let you know that i am working on 2 books at the same time whitch is very stupid of me considering im an ******* writer but you know YOLO. I just really that his second on would be an intresting and uneque take on an over saturated plaid out idea were people put little effort into making it uneque. Ill update once every other day sunday and monday less likly to update. Plz leve comments and check out other book just started publishing 3 days ago. So not much but it the other book as a uneque direction i see no one else taking so be patient and keep visiting.

How this has got so many 4-5 stars is shocking. The main character is completely useless. After 100 chapters he is still the same sniveling idiot coward that he started out as.

I love the way its written. Author has a way of immersing you into the story... Language is good. There is no grammatical errors. But can actually capitalise the 'I' in there... it doesn't make a diff but its just pleasing to eyes I guess.. Anyways keep up the good work. You have the ability to make people imagine exactly what you want them to.

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Ok here is my review: this story is well writin, the characture( specifically) the main one-is very relatable. Very well fleshed out- as you feel like your trying to survive with him. I love that he comes up with all these ways to survive with the things and abilities and tricker pies he had available. Uploads are consistent but it's never enough for me because the story is so fun to read-but it's all good. All around super story telling -very ruthless world-love the different relationships the main character has made.

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So here goes my review: I like how the way the prologue was made. The Author definitely had a good grasp on English, although there is some typo here and there but who was free from it? The premise of the story is interesting and unique. Although for me, I prefer a shorter paragraph. Yeah, definitely recommend this novel to be read.

ok im not best in explaining stuff but im a veteran reader here and i know a good book when i see one and this is a really good one and the character design is really good havent spotted any flaws yet updating stability good enough the world background is perfect no unnecesarry bs story developement is really good not perfect but really good and writing quality is one of the best you can find in webnovel cuz most of webnovel fics is just made by horny kids that force authors to destroy good concepts and this is really good stuff and probably eont be F.ed up

What an underrated book this is. I thhink that this is a great novel with lots of potential. The world is very unique and the story is exciting. I cannot wait for the next chapter to arrive.

I don't really even right reviews, but here goes. This is one of my favorite books in the whole site, which is saying something because I read alot of books. It has an amazing world building, Great characters, and it's very well written. There are some small gramatical errors, but the writing quality is still very easy to understand. The character develpment is slow but steady and doesn't seem forced. The only thing I could complain about is that the MC isn't overpowered enough. The fact that I like the overpowered MC but still read this book even though it doesn't have one just proves the books quality. I would rate this very highly and recommend that it should be read.

The writing it self isn't that bad but it constantly switches between first and third person, quotation marks are often missing and it is impossible to tell when someone is thinking something or saying it aloud or when sentences are a character's thoughts or the narrator's. There is a few grammar mistakes as well that make it very jarring to read.

This web is great for many reasons such at this time there is 26 chapters When you make a evil MC it is evil a reason and will stop anything to get and will be swayed by love, friends ect Two it magic system is great Three over all just give it a read Four the author replays when you say something

A soul gets thrown into a different world, lost and confused it manages to find a perfect vessel for itself – a dead old man. On its way to a town the man manages to obtain some monster cores and decides to use his new found wealth to realize his long time dream – becoming an old crazy bum. But nothing good lasts for long, a week later after scavenging for food in the trash he decides to go for a walk and unexpected happens. Turns out the magical fantasy world he is in has magic in it, so the man has a sudden change of heart, he decides to pursue his new found dream – magic. Will this crazy dead old man become the greatest wizard sorcerer in the world? I can't wait to find out!

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By far this is amazing and it deserves as much love as the author gave this. The MC is completely tortured by the world and it seems as if everything is against him. You feel bad for him and everyone feels so real and besides how beautiful the world is it's completely crazy.

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Hi there really like your story. It's well written it's well developed and really like the main character he's not like other novel's were mc is just stupid and gets his powers out of nowhere. Well that's my review keep up the good work.

This novel has tonnes of potential. First of all it's the entire grind. You, as the reader will not only be going through step-by-step of the MC's rise to power, but also about how his journey affect him as a person. Every incident changes a part of him, he doesn't stay the same. That's something I really like about this novel, the characterisation when it comes to the protagonist is on-point! Hmm, as for vibes I'd say it's close enough to Warlock of the Magus World. General world building is same too, but the author takes his own creative license on it, making it unique in several others. Maybe consider it as WMW with a dash of D&D and Warhammer. Best of all, the author has promised us a truly evil MC. I'm looking forward to following the author all the way until the MC is swallowing entire worlds for power!