webnovel

Unlimited Harem Works

Auteur: Kokushibou
Anime & Comics
Actuel · 207.5K Affichage
  • 8 Shc
    Contenu
  • audimat
  • N/A
    SOUTIEN

What is Unlimited Harem Works

Lisez le roman Unlimited Harem Works écrit par l'auteur Kokushibou publié sur WebNovel. Died.Meet God. Get's Wishes. Get's OP.Flexis His Power.Get's Harem.Flexis His Power More.The End.You want some deep character development? Then why even look here, just look at the title. If you want ...

Synopsis

Died.Meet God. Get's Wishes. Get's OP.Flexis His Power.Get's Harem.Flexis His Power More.The End. You want some deep character development? Then why even look here, just look at the title. If you want a good story, read Vegabond,Berserk,Kingdom or something like that. Not some shitty fanfic that's cleary going to include a harem. Im writing this, because im bored. English is not my first language. This is my first fanfic, so don't expect much. I could randomly drop it. Btw thumbnail is not mine, if you want me to take it down just message me.

Étiquettes
6 étiquettes
Vous aimerez aussi

검증메이저 부띠끄새주소 【btq-wd.com】 코드gg77 부띠끄주소 부띠끄코드 부띠끄사이트 부띠끄도메인 부띠끄먹튀 부띠끄검증

회원 여러분들께 먹튀위험이 단 눈꼽만큼의 가능성이라도 존재하는 악질 사설업체는 절대 소개하지않습니다. 부띠끄먹튀는 오랜기간 많은 사설사이트를 지켜봐온 저희 다음드는 어떤 사이트가 싸구려 솔루션으로 그림장만 바꿔가면서 운영을 하는지 정말 어느정도의 규모를 갖추고 오랜기간 운영해왔던 업체인지 단번에 알 수 있습니다. 하지만 일반 배터분들의 입장에서 단순히 검색만으로는 알기힘든 부분들이기 때문에 디테일한 부분들까지도 저희는 놓치지않고 완벽한 검증과정을 거친 부띠끄추천 사설토토업체만을 추천해드리고있습니다. 그리고 회원분들의 스타일에 맞게 자유롭게 부띠끄추천업체를 선택할 수 있도록 안전을 우선으로 하되 다른 부분들까지 빠짐없이 확인하여 그 어떤 검증업체보다 실속있는 부띠끄먹튀 먹튀검증업체입니다. 모든 업체들이 주력으로 사용하는 부띠끄먹튀 사설놀이터로 이용하기에 걸맞고도 남는 훌륭한 메이저 사설토토업체들입니다. 주소 : btq-wd.com 코드 : gg77 카카오톡 vava78 도메인불량시 링크클릭 https://wjdtnwlseovh.wixsite.com/59simba

DaoistukaT9C · sport
Pas assez d’évaluations
32 Chs

audimat

  • Tarif global
  • Qualité de l’écriture
  • Mise à jour de la stabilité
  • Développement de l’histoire
  • Conception des personnages
  • Contexte mondial
Critiques
Aimé
Nouveau
Kokushibou
KokushibouAuteurKokushibou

Just read the sypnosis and my Auxiliary chapter, if you are ok with stuff like this then. Good? If not then i honestly don't know what you are still doing here. Besides these things im open for criticism and ideas. By the way when someone gives me a 1 star review but only writes "TRASH" or something like that, then im gonna delete these because i don't need these reviews. They are annoying, nothing more nothing less.

Fantastic_Spirit
Fantastic_SpiritLv14Fantastic_Spirit

Honestly I dont know where to help you here. Usually people forget to put capitals and periods but not you. About the dialogue, the longer you write the more you figure out how to write better. Its sort of an experience thing. Well anyway this is just encouragement. Even if I havent read the story just for the 1st chapter 5 Stars . I completely agree with those statements btw.

NamelessPersona
NamelessPersonaLv3NamelessPersona

You use i a lot and every time it needs to be capitalized to I. The other big thing I would suggest is that the verbs need to be put in the past tense. Most English readers are used to past tense and it feels more natural for them. Present tense is possible but it usually dictates a commanding grasp of the English language. Just making those two changes will improve these chapters immensely. whenever i stands alone it needs to be capitalized

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

good. death note : misa and naomi. .......................................................................................................................................................

TintedvCeo
TintedvCeoLv5TintedvCeo

👍🏻👍🏿👍🏽👍🏻👍🏽👍🏽👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏻👍🏻👍👍🏻👍🏽👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏻👍👍👍🏻👍🏽👍🏽👍🏿👍🏿👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍🏽👍🏽👍🏻👍🏻👍👍🏽👍🏽👍🏿👍🏽👍🏻👍👍👍🏽👍🏿👍🏿👍🏽🥰👍🏻

SOUTIEN

En savoir plus sur ce livre

Parents Strongly Cautionedmature rating
Rapport