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Transmigre en un Otome game que parecía ser normal

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What is Transmigre en un Otome game que parecía ser normal

Lisez le roman Transmigre en un Otome game que parecía ser normal écrit par l'auteur xSariel_Archangel publié sur WebNovel. ¿Quien en su sano juicio se le ocurrio la grandiosa idea de traerme a esta porquería de mundo?¿A que Dios ofendi? ¿Zeus? ¿Jehova? ¿Ra? ¿Odín?*crash**crash**crash*Pense mientras escuchaba una serie de ...

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¿Quien en su sano juicio se le ocurrio la grandiosa idea de traerme a esta porquería de mundo? ¿A que Dios ofendi? ¿Zeus? ¿Jehova? ¿Ra? ¿Odín? *crash**crash**crash* Pense mientras escuchaba una serie de golpes limpios de un metal contra la puerta de madera. Coloque rapidamente un armario frente a ella y otros objetos pesados. Con la esperanza que me diera mas tiempo para encontrar una salida. ¿Crees que les tengo miedo? a la mierda todos ustedes si asi creen que voy a rezarles. ¿Que me haran? ¿matarme? Eso es lo que tenia que pasar desde un principio, pero alguien se hizo el muy chistoso y me trajo aquí. Buscaba desesperado un objeto sólido para tratar de romper la ventana o en el peor de los casos, defenderme. Y escuché que los golpes se hacian mas fuerte. *CRASH**CRASH**CRASH* ¡Jodanse mis princpios! Comence a rezarles a todos los dioses que existen y que no. Los golpes no paraban. La puerta no soportó mas y cayeron pedazos en el suelo. -NO, ¡POR FAVOR AYUDENME, NO QUIERO VOLVER ALLÍ!,AYUD... Sentí un pichazo en el antebrazo con el que me cubria la cabeza y noté una aguja con un líquido extraño. Me sentí mareado y caí al suelo. Lo ultimo que vi fuerón un par de corazones frotando al frente de la puerta antes de perder el conocimiento. ---*--- Hola, ¿Como estan? espero que bien. Soy un escritor novato asi que si pueden dejarme sus opiniones y criticas constructivas estaria mas que agradecido. Esta no es una historia donde se deberia seguir un ejemplo, es todo lo opuesto. Y no todo se tratara como en el comienzo, ahogandote de comedia barata, todo ira poco a poco. Me principal objetivo es el desarrollo de personajes, en el momento que alguien me diga que puede diferenciar quien habla en una conversacion, estare sabiendo que lo estoy haciendo bien. Subire un capítulo cada lunes y viernes. Si no es asi, en los dias siguientes, es un problema con el internet. Ya tengo varios capítulos listos.

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