Very interesting, especially MC [atleast part of him] and his power..I dont think anyone has done this,,,dope...I'll just say this, Zahard was an extremely intelligent and ruthless person, even in his past,,,so do make use of it and dont make him a perverted retard....also, try to look at this realistically and not in a retared manner like the usual one piece SI....would be nice if MC is like a decade before cannon OR if this is an AU, would be interesting [ Z could be marines, U could add more emperors maybe like 7, more admirals, fk up cannon?],,,,
suggestion: intelligent OP MC, no happy retard...add some romance and fluff, just build it and no forced shallow ****...GL..u got something cool here, and unique
I dont know powers to suggest cause whilst I read TOG, its powers always confused me.....but a phasing and merging ability, or an illusion **** would be cool...anyway GL