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The Hidden Gift

Auteur: MzMysteryy
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Lisez le roman The Hidden Gift écrit par l'auteur MzMysteryy publié sur WebNovel. Strange things start happening after Maria Summers wins her Tennis Championship Finals. Caleb, her twin brother takes her, Madison, her bestfriend, and Cyrus out to celebrate when suddenly she starts ...

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Strange things start happening after Maria Summers wins her Tennis Championship Finals. Caleb, her twin brother takes her, Madison, her bestfriend, and Cyrus out to celebrate when suddenly she starts hearing voices. At first she pays them no mind thinking it's just mind games until they come back...louder and stronger which then results in her hurting her brother. Later on she finds out that she's getting her powers back but they were binded when she was young for a reason and that her friends and brother also have powers too. Too many things happening in one day causes her to freak out a little and then a mysterious man shows up holding her mother as a hostage. What is really going on? Five years later, Maria, Caleb and Madison are taking in and training those that are superhumans, mutants and those who can also do magic. Maria's on a search for the man who killed her mother and trying to get to the bottom of whatever he's planning, Caleb worries about his sister's health, Madison tries to keep the house intact, the kids and everyone safe and people from the past start turning up. What's in store for these three? Well start reading to find out ;)

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Thereviewer48
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Writing Quality: 3/5 Your writing is fine, but you have problems with punctuation, especially not using commas when needed; it throws the flow of the story off. Update Stability: 5/5 I give that to everyone. Story Development: 3.5/5 (rounds to four) The plotline is good, the time skip threw me off, and the pacing is okay. Character Design: 3.5/5 (rounds to four) There is no connection to the MC, I feel like I don't know much about her, except for vague things are what you give. I feel there is not much depth to her. But, she does have personality and not bad. World Background: 3/5 I barely know anything about your world. It is interesting and not bad, but I don't know much. I feel like it needs to be more descriptions about your world. You are on a good track, keep up the good work!

Craig_Watson
Craig_WatsonLv10Craig_Watson

Pretty interesting with the girl and her powers. I am curious to finishing it and see where it all leads. also, I love the intro and how it played out as well as her power reveal.

KristineElias
KristineEliasLv2KristineElias

This has been a good start. The writing and grammar are both good. The use of punctuation marks are pretty good as well, just be careful with commas and don't overdo them. It would be better to have a regular update schedule as readers usually get bored and drop books that does not have a regular update. Over all, its a good read so far.

TacoKun
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This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna take a shit so much. If this novel got some drive, thank God its still alive. Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha.

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