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The game of gods

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What is The game of gods

Lisez le roman The game of gods écrit par l'auteur Darell_Barnes publié sur WebNovel. In a world with gods that live eternally, humans are viewed as amusement and gamble. throughout the history of man kind powers was bestowed upon fitting individuals, and with this God's Game slowly ca...

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In a world with gods that live eternally, humans are viewed as amusement and gamble. throughout the history of man kind powers was bestowed upon fitting individuals, and with this God's Game slowly came into existence.

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Loyalscum
LoyalscumLv13Loyalscum

I'm not gonna lie this novel made me confused. The author jumped around a lot without describing the scenes clearly, people motivation, characteristics that make you love a character. I'm sorry to say this but this novel needs a rework.

Bunny_Junnie
Bunny_JunnieLv4Bunny_Junnie

Quite interesting story! I just remembered about grandmaster of Marvel universe. As I am a big fan of Marvel, I want to see what will happen to the humans! Great thoughts with nice plot! Keep it up! I appreciate it!

mrant12
mrant12Lv2mrant12

This novel shows GREAT promise. Excellent attempt! Keep writing and keep improving. No matter what happens, do not lose heart and stay strong. The more you write, the smoother it'll be.

Monarch_Of_Death
Monarch_Of_DeathLv2Monarch_Of_Death

Not to make a lie here, the first problem was about the grammar (tho me too) and also, some words creating confusion to the readers . Just like the other, I also advise Grammarly. Need more work and effort.

TheViking5500
TheViking5500Lv4TheViking5500

saw your request on the forum so I came and checked your story out. It's not bad although, some things like in the description and first chapters are quite confusing. Maybe I would recommend and see if you could formulate your description and sentences a bit differently it would be a massive improvement. Other than that the story has an interesting concept and if you develop it further the story may become potentially really be good. But as said the way some sentences and things are described need to be fixed, otherwise there is just too much confusion in my opinion. If you don't use it already, I would recommend you use grammarly. it has a free version and is very helpful

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