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Story of a time traveler

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Lisez le roman Story of a time traveler écrit par l'auteur mysterious_being publié sur WebNovel. Rhyme is just a normal student who aspires to become a successful scientist one day, got accepted at Columbia University in New York. She just landed in New York from Paris to fulfill her dreams.But l...

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Rhyme is just a normal student who aspires to become a successful scientist one day, got accepted at Columbia University in New York. She just landed in New York from Paris to fulfill her dreams. But life has something else in store for her. What happens when a science student gets the key to time travel on the same day as her friend whom she loves dies in a car accident? Will she be able to save him by going back in time and breaking the rules of time travel? I won't give out any major spoilers in the synopsis. Read to find out more.... It sounds like a boring typical sci-fi novel but trust me, it's gonna be an emotional roller-coaster. I have tried to cover various genres like romance, fantasy, comedy, thriller, suspense, aliens etc. It won't be as boring as your science class, but I can promise you one thing, it will be 100 times more fun!! P.S. : This is my first novel so please ignore any grammatical mistakes. Also, my updates might not be regular as I am still studying (in final year of high school). Please forgive me for that, and enjoy the novel!

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Rose2426
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By far... This is the best original sci-fi novel I've read on this app The author's creativity combined with his/her knowledge of some *actual* physics (yes ACTUAL) has made this a fine piece of art. The visual effect could be improved The world, the characters, the storyline.... Muaahhhh LOVE IT!!

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It is a very well put presentation of Stephen Hawking's work, then mixing in an smart FL with a potential ML already announced at the beginning with a bitter sweet back story. The only real issue I have (only based to the end of chapter 5) is that you had the balls to actually tell you reader to skip 2-3 paragraphs because of the detail of scientific discovery. No, that is not okay! You are writing a sci-fi! If any f***er is going to complain about too much scientific detail on a novel then they should go perform a physics experiment with the mass of their body! Right on to the good stuff. Grammar: Your first chapter was beyond expectation but the further you go in the more mistakes you find and unfortunately that plays a huge part in breaking up the flow of the story. Go back have a read, in particular the part where Ryme leaves the pizza shop. Characters: Well they got personalities! each one is different and you can tell them apart from the dialogue but as for actual looks? No idea, it's lacking in that department. As for the dialogue, it seems rushed and not all that put together. I would have loved to see where Ryme shows up to the meeting early expanded. Go wild, you are the painter takes us to where you want us to be with your words. World: I find one of the hardest things to ever do. To be able to keep up with what everything looks like and the dialogue and what people look like and how others feel. Is a little overwhelming but completely necessary in any good read. You want to be taken to the same room, see the same people be able to look at the landscape and believe you are there. Unfortunately just saying New York won't cut it that much all I see is skyscrapers. Give it a little more effort, you have the skill to describe complicated theories with examples so there should be no reason you can't put that same effort into writing everything else.

Allen_Clay012
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It's a shame that no one reviewed this novel. In my case I enjoyed the fact that the author gave details. The author seems to be knowledgeable in science especially physics that he/she was able to describe how stuff works in his/her story. Here is my verdict for the ratings... Writing Quality 4/5 - I am not confident in spotting grammatical errors so I wouldn't comment on that matter. Stability of Updates 5/5 - Why would this matter? Quality of chapters is always better than quantity. Story Development 5/5 - I love the progress of the story so far despite being slow. The love story is also okay since it sounds a bit sensible. For me I prefer this kind of romance over the cliche and forced ones. Character Design 5/5 - Yup I like character with brains rather than brawns or emotional ones. World Background 4/5 - A story based on the real world, check. So far the setting of the story is good. 4.6 is the total verdict of the novel. I will follow the story as promised. Sounds interesting especially the scientific stuff that is mentioned by the author. I really, really love sci-fi stories!

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