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Reincarnated as leviathan

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Synopsis

A man dies due stupidity of others and reincarnates as a monster " mm.. Where am I?" " WHAT THE HECK IS A leviathan" System: " leviathan:the most ancient, terrible, terrifying, abominable, cold, ruthless, and gluttonous of all monsters some of the bigger ones of the species are capable of swallowing a whole mountain in one chomp. This species is thought to be extinct" Join him on his journey to... Well he has no goal really... Note: I don't own the picture

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This is my first time writing anything I just doing this on a whim please tell me your honest opinion ( Ps. I have a delicate heart to please be nice in you criticism)

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Mrboogey13 · Fantaisie
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malachi_Pharr
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Here's my overall opinion on the novel. Writing quality: There are quite a lot of spelling mistakes. They're mostly missing letters and additional letters. The author has a tendency to add a lot of spacing between sentences (As in seperation between paragraphs, not spaces between words and such) but they get rid of it around 40 chapters in and it's not necessarily unimmersive. And despite what I will say in Story Development, the author is good at keeping the reader entertained. Even if most of his jokes fall flat. I have to say, my biggest problem that I have with the story is that the author does several pretty generic and aggravating cliche's, but because of the novels pacing they will be done in at most a few pages. Story development: I have to say that this might be the only reason I stayed. The pacing of the story is a bit fast but that works in its favor because whenever there was a cliche that annoyed me, it would be done in a 2-4 pages with maybe a small reappearance later. If you run into something you dont like, I recommend skimming by quickly. The overall story is enjoyable but it would suck if it was ruined because of something you didn't like. About the MC himself? If you like a story with a mc who overcomes obstacles to become stronger... hehehe. Not a thing here buddy, Not. At. All. I think he reaches his peak strength at like chapter 40 or so. And then he just refines his powers. Character Designs: What I'll refer to as the NPC's aren't overly unique and eye catching in their personality, but the conversations and such flow well together making the talks understandable and at the least, not boring. World Background: Its nothing detailed like Eragon or The Land (actual published novels) obviously but that means it doesn't bore you with the nitty gritty so I guess that's a plus.

Kaisen1
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Christian_Sprague_1043Lv15

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