Re: Monster King

A shameless review by the author hehe. I started this project a few months ago and I have some chapters saved, I look forward to you coming back reader, I believe that here you will find a pleasant reading and I will take into account all the criticism left throughout the story. Take my hand and let's grow together.

I don't usually give 5 stars, but I truly believe this novel deserves it. I don't know if the story is modeled after the manga Re:Monster (an amazing fantasy manga if you're looking for one), but it closely resembles it in several aspects. The goblin pov, leveling up through consuming enemies, etc. While there are many similarities, I would be hesitant to say it's the same. The story is extremely well written and very interesting to read. I had no problem staying invested and made sure to add this story to my library. I will conclude with a heartfelt congratulation, this is very good and I encourage you to continue writing.

the story is good and characters are well described. but you need to improve the synopsis man. if I sugarcoat it, then you could do better synopsis but without sugarcoating, the synopsis is plain trash. I can't really feel any attraction to it. you have to let me know a brief description what I can expect from the story. please change the synopsis. this story is good but it might go unnoticed because of the synopsis.

Have enjoyed this one a lot awesome story line amazing creativity Cant wait for the next update keep up the good writting !!!!!! 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

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I think there's a problem with the writing quality because there are a few mistakes I want to point out though I don't have time. Overall, I love the beginning. Good luck with editing.

Gotta say, this is one has one of the most eye-catching cover, and the story doesn't really disappoint comparatively. Plot is pretty intriguing. Using the first person POV was a pretty bold move and I personally think it pays off. World building and character development of this novel is very well written. Story also has the quality to keep you hooked to itself. There are some mistakes here and there but they can be easily rectified in the editing. Overall, this is worth giving a try and I would like to recommend it to everyone.

I really like the character design setup and world building of this book. Swell written piece which people will regret not reading, if they don't.

Honestly. I'm usually quite honest with my reviews. If there are flaws I will state them. ...but I don't really see any flaws as of now The grammar is good, though a few mistakes can be seen here and there, it's nothing to be really picky about. Worldbuilding, character design, and stability of updates are all good. Of course, that is because the novel only has 23 chapters, but it just means that so far the author has done an amazing job! Seriously keep up the good work!

Of the rip, the book has a very interesting premise. Digging into a new world is always fun and this one seems really cool. I'm a huge sucker for fantasy stories and this one, in particular, has a lot of potential. Give it a shot, the author seems to know what they are doing!

It has a very provincial style of writing which is great. Nothing wrong at all with the pacing, characters. The only problem is it may lack depth which is fine for a web novel but with your skills, you can definitely get a published book

I think the character development and story development is great! The story is very mystifieing so it hooked me up pretty early. Great job Author!

Amazing concept with thrilling lines. How can someone exist in that kind of place!!! Superb plot outline. Looking forward to get more and more.

When i started to read chapter 1 I was skeptical about this background info, when i came to the end of chapter it all made a perfect sense. The quality of writing and the style are on the high level. The only things that bother me is, I don't really like a story from first person POV and I kinda think that mc's fvery first skill maybe too OP. Overall, it's a good and interesting read. Waiting to see its future!

I Really like the word building in this. the onlY real fault i see is that is was hard to till If the character greed is Being reborn into a new world or One he was already apart Of. Other than that out out more chapters bro You definitely got a story here

Interesting read, we can have a incredible story development and more interactions with the characters, Its already in my library looking forward for more updates

I had to stop midway but the world-building of this novel is good and leaves a lot to read more but if you like Greek myth then you can go on and make sure that you check this out and give it a read. I haven't seen any errors but I read mid-way but someone else might find something but I will read more but so far hardly any errors. Keep it up, author.

You have a really good story here, but honestly, your sypnosis needs to improve because I nearly skipped your story because of it. Great story tho

I like the mythology and the battle between light and dark. The creation of lesser gods it resembles a lot of Greek mythology. The premise is good and so is the execution.

due to the swap review, I will review this novel. Thank you for reviewing mine... This story reminds me of the myth which the old told to their grandchild long long time ago, it's so warmhearted. it's well written... keep on going, author...