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PSYCHIC DIMENSIONAL CHAT GROUP

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Lisez le roman PSYCHIC DIMENSIONAL CHAT GROUP écrit par l'auteur zecran publié sur WebNovel. He was reborn as Mob's brother Ritsu and when his first day of school he noticed someone invite him on a group chat....

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He was reborn as Mob's brother Ritsu and when his first day of school he noticed someone invite him on a group chat.

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GonadSmasher08
GonadSmasher08Lv14GonadSmasher08

The story is dead right from the beginning. Character design Its poor. (The god here is stupid). The MC is very much like a shadow. No personality and sh*t. World making Average at best Story development It is rush, like it is being written for the sake of having something written. The system its self is not broken but having "creation of all things" techniques is the last straw that broke the camel's back. Using money your technique makes to buy something from one of you skill is on a completely different scale of being O.P. He does not he just asked god to be a "god" also. P.s. the way to revive this story is for the MC to have a very poor proficiency on the techniques he buys. Just imagine a Saitama (one punch man) if he have a martial arts god proficiency in his techniques. Do you think he will not commit suicide?

BlaqueLyte
BlaqueLyteLv6BlaqueLyte

I'm wondering why a new novel, weeks old and only 3 chapters long has so many reviews and such a high rating. Seem false to me, especially after reading those 3 chapters. And 5 star stability updates??? Oh the lies. Poorly constructed sentences, not very well thought out plot. Little to no real story development (and no, story development does not simply mean more chapters or having the mc do more things) Almost no world background or character development. Just plot armor circumstance to plot armor circumstance.

helboy1996
helboy1996Lv12helboy1996

Interesting concept, rushed development, ridiculous op. Well but ok for a random read maybe good if you want to read a ridiculous and fast progress

Kurama_is_tsundere
Kurama_is_tsundereLv6Kurama_is_tsundere

Really few chapters are out yet but I like the wishes that the MC made this fanfiction has got some potential. So writing this review to give it a rating. Ps. Author - thanks for writing this fanfic and keep up the great work appreciate it. This just needs more chapters and frequent updates.

Elzik
ElzikLv15Elzik

Honestly it's terrible there's no struggle at all he could just create the infinity stones and do whatever he likes he's too op and why would there be a half Asian Asgardian?

Hommer
HommerLv5Hommer

it's good but the update is slow and I hope the MC won't be fooled by Nick Fury and maybe you can make it a little comedy if you can do it.,....................

pan39
pan39Lv5pan39

İts good story please not stop writing - ___-------_____--_______-_-___----__________----________--/__:__7'('7&7&7'6:5:58&&(&(&(&(&7&(':__----_------__________-_--------------------_-___________------____---__---_/!///:/::::__---_____---/-__///

top_notch_monster
top_notch_monsterLv3top_notch_monster

Broken system is so coollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

Igloo124
Igloo124Lv2Igloo124

This is interesting, there is a lot of cool mixes from different places and I like it. There is a lot of things you can play with, for example, changing the MCU timeline. hmm, wonder how is he going to deal with S.H.I.L.D.

Zerro1337
Zerro1337Lv5Zerro1337

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Bruhnoe
BruhnoeLv5Bruhnoe

I do not intend to make a large and detailed review. This novel is well written, without grammatical errors. But other than that, the novel is pretty bad. Very unrealistic the actions of MC, and everyone around. Very fast story progression. And for an MC who has spent a desire to be smart, he's pretty dumb. For those who just want to go with the flow and not care about reality and how its actions affect the world, the novel should please you. If it's not what you want then better not read.

DIGBALAYA_PRADHAN
DIGBALAYA_PRADHANLv4DIGBALAYA_PRADHAN

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