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Overpowered Trap in the Multiverse

Auteur: lSpacel
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Lisez le roman Overpowered Trap in the Multiverse écrit par l'auteur lSpacel publié sur WebNovel. Audrey was a normal teen in an abnormal world, that may or may not look like a woman, after the ending of humanity and the eradication of not only his family but his entire world by monsters, he was d...

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Audrey was a normal teen in an abnormal world, that may or may not look like a woman, after the ending of humanity and the eradication of not only his family but his entire world by monsters, he was determined to continue on living, given the chance to start over and travel between the vast Multiverse.

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There are no obvious or major issues But that doesn’t mean there aren’t 1. The pacing is stupid fast and you don’t describe what is happening so it’s hard to get an Indea to what is going on (I don’t think you even described the mc) 2. Some of the things done or said in this story have not been thought through like the mc instantly picking Cote even though the world has nothing to offer beyond time These are the only real issues and both can be fixed by spending time rereading or just thinking about the chapter before you post it

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Hmmmmmmmm... We shall see how this story goes.

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