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ONE PIECE: I GET A DEVIL FRUIT AT THE START

Marco arrived in the world of One Piece overnight. He transmigrated into the body of a 15 year old who had the same name as him. However, after looking at the table in front of him, he was slightly surprised... I'm a new writer, I'm doing a story for fun. I would like to get as much feedback as possible so I can improve. I welcome all constructive criticism The chapters are not long due to the lack of time I have. But the story is pretty fun to read!

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SWORD

I quickly left the island with this new boat. I decided to name it Inpa Boat. Furthermore, I gave it this name because the ability of my demon fruit is named like that.

The boat has a pretty fast speed, so after a few minutes we couldn't see the island anymore. I let go of the steering wheel of the boat and went to the cabins.

In the cabins there are three doors, one for the kitchen, one for resting and the last one for storing treasures.

After searching the treasures on the boat, I made a list of the things that were there:

2,000,000 Belies, Three good quality Swords, Some pistols.

At the moment I was looking for weapons, that's what I was missing the most. Because, although I have physical strength, if I can handle a weapon and learn to master my fruit with a weapon, my power will improve a lot.

I picked up two swords and a pistol and walked out of the treasure room into the courtyard of the ship.

Outside, the sky is all blue with only a few clouds, it's the perfect time to practice wielding weapons.

I started by taking the two swords, I took two swords because I looked cooler holding two swords instead of one. I thought for a few minutes about what technique I could create to improve the effectiveness of my fruit.

My fruit allows me to improve the power of attack and can completely improve a weapon. So for the power to be maximal, I have to make the area of the substance of my fruit minimal. The weaker the area, the higher the strength.

So I tried to put some substance only on the cutting area of the sword. You have to know that a sword has a very small cutting area, up to a few millimeters.

This is a perfect area for my fruit to be most effective. So I started to reduce the area of the substance, except that when I reached 3 centimeters wide and 15 centimeters long, I could not continue. Because the more I reduced, the more tired I became.

I tried to keep this shape as long as possible, however after a few minutes I got slack and could not continue.

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