Omniversal Trade Center

Love this fic. The author is so intelligent , the writing is so brilliant. I am his biggest fan. lol

it has a lot of potential. just dont turn it into a pokemon harem we r good' dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it

I'll give this 5 star because I am sooo looking forward to this

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.Its good and has a lot of potential. just dont turn it into a pokemon harem dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it dont drop it

The quality of the writing is good but the fact that he writes without knowing the characters personality especially one piece infuriates me

Looking forward for more of this Fic! keep it up!

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