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Naruto form start refuse the marriage of Mito Uzumaki[FanFiction ]

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What is Naruto form start refuse the marriage of Mito Uzumaki[FanFiction ]

Lisez le roman Naruto form start refuse the marriage of Mito Uzumaki[FanFiction ] écrit par l'auteur Silver_mix publié sur WebNovel. travelling to different Anime world doing task getting stronger and creating your own world it's going to be a long journey the start is wrong but hope the ending is right.[ if you have any suggestion...

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travelling to different Anime world doing task getting stronger and creating your own world it's going to be a long journey the start is wrong but hope the ending is right. [ if you have any suggestions you can write me I will soon add link to discord. this is going to be my third novel the previous to got dropped because of depression previous 2 got dropped but this one is fan fiction as longest my health doesn't go too bed I should able to complete this novel for my current situation just walking is quite painful. my English is not something I have learnt in school so it's not perfect so I hope someone can help me playing is always good even if somebody didn't I should table to complete this normal that is my only wish ]

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……….. ………. ……… …….. She whisper to herself "It's fine, as she doesn't know him". She then stopped the cab in front of a coffee shop and wish herself the best. She encounters a quite complex scene when a customer tend to order food and drinks which doesn't offered there. She explained gently and respectfully to them but they're quite stubborn and called her manager. One guy stood up and said "I'm sorry, but this is a coffee shop."He said with a stern and powerful aura. They looked and greet him with respect. They whisper " that's Ian Arthur. He's handsome and a great businessman. I heard that he owns lots of things in our country ". The other one said " I would love if he's fancy on me." .... "HaHaHa..who can charm him better than me".. another one said " You can only dream ....hahaha".... "well, who knows ... he picks one of us". They ordered Claire to leave them and continue chit-chatting. Claire feels that she's nearly get fired and make her body stern. She continues serve the others until it's time to go. She get her paycheque and head to the main entrance. She then bump to a guy " Sorry, i didn't mean to...." Before she even finished it.... He said " You should see where you heading.You might get someone hurt." And headed to his fancy Maserati. Claire got speechless and get home walking. She's miserable when she thinks of what a day she had today. Apart from that, she should be bold as she had her VIVA for her master degree. However, she still feel in debt with the Ian Arthur as he help her encounter the situation this morning. Door bells ringing and suddenly she remembered that Lilly A.K.A her stepsister had said that she'd invited her for a sleepover at her place. Lilly drop by and they had a great chit-chatting. Lilly said "You know what, Dad just give me an Audi TT as a birthday gift." Claire feels quite uncomfortable when she said the word "Dad" as before they became family, Lilly likes to bully her a lot and her stepmother married her father after her mom's death of Cancer. It's hard to believe that both of them are family. Lilly whispered to her heart " well, I will show you that your dad will go against you and love me more." She plastered her face with fake smile and think about how to despise Claire out of the family. Through her chit-chatting, she now knows how to make her know her place in their family. Claire doesn't realise that Lilly still has urged against her although they're family now. She just ignored her bad feelings towards Lilly and try to be friendly as always. ……….. ……….. ………..

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Cancerous_worm
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Everything is average but I couldn’t read for more than 1 minute before my head ached from the writing, it’s worse than a machine-translated (mtl) novel.

TFH
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well.... at least i give you a 4☆ for effort... i just had to read the badly written title to understand that you barely have any english knowledge since having grammar mistakes on the novel title is a mess.

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ImNex
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Here to support the new author. You might not be experienced and will probably drop the fanfic but if you actually like writing, don't give up. People might complain constantly so get used to it and never surrender. I have a few quotes for you. Take one step at a time. Giving up is worse than being stuck in infinite loops of failures. It's very easy for us humans to find constant new passions in life but need guts to remain faithful in one specific project and skills to profit out of it. I'm going to be honest. Your work right now is not even readable but I believe it will get so much better one day. Writing a book is like planting a tree. You put a seed of idea inside the ground then pour words of water everyday consistently and you won't notice it but the tree will start growing slowly and surely until oneday it starts bearing fruits of money. Ofcause, not every tree grows fruit and the quantity between each trees will always vary. It depends on the quality of the seed. So make sure that the idea of your novel or fanfic actually have potential as well. Was it confusing? If it was, apologies. I kind of start typing what I have in mind everytime I'm giving advice, lol. Bye :)

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