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Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)

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Lisez le roman Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again) écrit par l'auteur HelloDarkness07 publié sur WebNovel. A 25 year old man merged with the body of a 5 year old British child. In 1924. As a Wizard. Read on to keep up with his adventures in studying Magic!...

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A 25 year old man merged with the body of a 5 year old British child. In 1924. As a Wizard. Read on to keep up with his adventures in studying Magic!

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B0ssu
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The fact that the author has a better grasp of English than 99% of the people who post on this site is the only good thing I can say about this story. The MC is little more than a plot device, veering between competence and idiocy as needed to suit the plot. The fusion of the HP world and the MCU world is an interesting concept, but has been handled lazily and shows that not enough thought was put into worldbuilding. All this is symptomatic of the worst and fatal flaw of this story, that the author is unwilling or unable to deviate from the stations in canon. Starting the story in the 30s, well in advance of the main plotline of both franchises, should have given plenty of opportunities to cause meaningful changes. However, the author has gone out of his way to make his MC an over-confident and moronic imbecile whenever necessary, to make sure that all the major stations of canon will still happen. And what little original content there has been is so flat that it's not worth the constant Idiot Balls to make this story a glorified canon rehash. Basically, save yourselves the time. Just re-watch the HP movies, the MCU movies, and the X-Men movies and you'll get a more competently executed and enjoyable version of this story.

CloggedMeridian
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WealthyRaccoon
WealthyRaccoonLv14WealthyRaccoon

Power, be it political, magical or social, is the ability to influence a situation in favour of one's desired outcome; so despite the MCs myriad abilities he is truly powerless. The author consistently kneecaps Mason any time he has the potential to exert power and by extension be relevant, leaving us with little more than a recap of canon from a different perspective. A well written world held back by an author to concerned with holding back.

Dayside
DaysideLv12Dayside

Very mediocre and incredibly boring. It's like a take of HP fanfiction that's supposed to be 'realistic' but still 'op' and due to that it's not realistic at all. It comes out as a bit of a mess, really.

Phoenix1998
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Egika
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Harie_Dharan
Harie_DharanLv4Harie_Dharan

i liked the previous one better. this has more details and all but in trying to make the mc not too op you made too weak even with all his powers. i mean he is a mutant, a sorcerror and a wizard who actually is physically strong but still got caught by someone and took so long to escape.

DartUpdates
DartUpdatesLv14DartUpdates

BACK!!!! Side note, not gonna start reading until this has atleast 15 chapters . .

DaoistfwGiBL
DaoistfwGiBLLv1DaoistfwGiBL

the author likes to nerf the character to create new scenes, when the character is powerful enough the author makes him lose to a random mage who isn't even strong

Stevie_nods
Stevie_nodsLv4Stevie_nods

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Achilles_Bahadur
Achilles_BahadurLv4Achilles_Bahadur

Not good enough. Almost follow canon and play safe. The concept of merging HP and Marvel is good, however Author nerf MC alot. Not good enough. Almost follow canon and play safe. The concept of merging HP and Marvel is good, however Author nerf MC alot.

ManSpider11
ManSpider11Lv1ManSpider11

The Fanfic has improved over time so I think readers that want to read this story needs to give it a chance first before bailing out. Don't expect a Gary Stu MC, the MC is overpowered but so is every villain he faces and this is not a wish-fulfillment story so don't expect an easy time for the MC. The author does a great job of making a realistic MC and great supporting characters and villains and is great at character development. The author also does a great job of immersing you in the world through great World Building, The only problem here for me is the stability of updates sometimes sucks.

Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6Phoenix1998

Nice so far. Great long chapter. Hope the quality is maintained. Excited for more. Nice so far. Great long chapter. Hope the quality is maintained. Excited for more.

Mordukai
MordukaiLv13Mordukai

Boring that's all I wish to say. I have been using this story to help me with my sleep problems. I'm still figuring out how it has 4 stars.

Munchnax
MunchnaxLv4Munchnax

While its a good story I personally dont enjoy it, Mc is way to nice and emotional for me. While I havent read past him being like 9 so not sure if it's the whole young body young mind troupe but I personally dont like Mc's who wpuld somewhat risk being exposed to tuen criminals in by mind controling then and than gain absolutely nothing from it... But It is a good story if you like lawful good type Mc's.

Shadow_Guest
Shadow_GuestLv14Shadow_Guest

I have waited my whole life for this.

DaoisttTmHpP
DaoisttTmHpPLv1DaoisttTmHpP

Hello to the author from Russia, I read all your fanfiction through Google translator, as well as the message that I am writing to you, I also write through it, why am I, because despite the incomprehensible text in places, I, like other readers, fell in love with this fanfic and your author's work, I will hope that you will not give up this business and continue to delight all readers, good luck.

benny69
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One of the best fan fictions I have ever read. Normally with this sort of thing mc gets op way to quick or suddenly gets unstoppable but that dosnt happen here while he is op it is gradual and he dosnt suddenly become a god.

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

The story is not the problem itself, the problem is that the author subliminally promotes the international LGTB agenda. Homosexuality is one of the ingredients in this story. I am NOT critical of anyone's taste or sexual preference, but the least I could do is add warnings and labels. It's already infuriating that Hollywood, Netflix and other media outlets force the LGBT agenda down their throats.

TheLibraryofLife
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