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Mana Star System: Soul Rebirth

Auteur: Nospacess
Magical Realism
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What is Mana Star System: Soul Rebirth

Lisez le roman Mana Star System: Soul Rebirth écrit par l'auteur Nospacess publié sur WebNovel. -Accepted, Welcome Donis. This is the [Mana Star System].-This book is about our protagonist, Donis Laurent, exploring the magic world of Erazar. Knowing nothing of this world, he'll have to face what...

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-Accepted, Welcome Donis. This is the [Mana Star System].- This book is about our protagonist, Donis Laurent, exploring the magic world of Erazar. Knowing nothing of this world, he'll have to face whatever this second try at life has to throw at him. A world where everyone has a system, knows of magic, and is ruled by the strong. His ability to thrive in this world will only be limited by his drive, and not his aptitude. Born with the rarest blessing, seen only once before in the last few hundred years, Donis will have to face the greed of all the old monsters of Erazar. Hi, this is Nospacess, and it's my first novel. The uploads will be slightly erratic at first as I'm still trying to figure out a writing schedule, but I hope to release a chapter a day, and if things permit, two chapters a day. Each chapter will be 1.5k-2.5k words at least. I would love any and all criticism, and want to make the story grow with the reader. So if you have anything you want to point out, add, or question, I'll read every comment. The new cover is done by "ivanwithvodka" on fiverr! Big thank you for the commission and the timely delivery!

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THE LIFE CIRCLE

In life,a person must live to understand that there are good people and bad people existing. For my case and today,I come to talk about the reality.Live is a circle, everybody should understand. For someone to be referred as a good person,he or she is always doing at least good things to others. Remember we are people,and only people can stay together, with love, peace and kindness. Learn to respect one another, love your friends and all people in general. By that, good things will happen to you in your entire life. What you do today,is your pay back tomorrow.Do good,Do good and that good will turn on you. Some people may be living under the strainous life,life full of struggles,they are always wondering what sort of life are they really in or living, without neither flashbacking of their past deeds nor dreaming for a better life tomorrow. The difficulties or struggles imposed in their lives is because of their bad doings, they may be have shown bad gratitude towards other people. Sometimes it's because you disrespected your elders like teachers in school or either your parents at home.In this realistic life we are currently living in,those things will forever hunt you in your entire life. And if you so that generous, don't give up on helping the needy,and in this case I came to find out that some people help others either to boost themselves or to find love. Take example of some cases in the surrounding,men assist needy girls to get the girls loving them or go boost around how helpful they are to those needy people.Thats too bad indeed. I live to say what's the truth, even if you wanna stone me to death then you are free to do so,and I will be ready to die for speaking the truth. Red-eye people,who always get angry to other people's progress in life,be ready to stay a very difficulty life forever. The pain shall remain deep down in your heart just because of jealousy. Not unless you change your minds and attitude towards others. Live to appreciate other people's effort,they will also do the same for you. Remember we are like brothers and sisters, despite the differences in skin colour,continents or countries we come from.i repeat do good,do good and just try to be good in life, you will reap only goodness.@H.S.J printers. Printed by PHISHON.

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dragon_Individual
dragon_IndividualLv14dragon_Individual

So far so good. Technically the update schedule is not set in stone yet but I’ll still give it five stars. ————————————————— Keep up the good work!

Snoodle_Booper
Snoodle_BooperLv4Snoodle_Booper

This novel deserves a read to any that are looking for a great fantasy novel it first follows the typical norms of all reincarnation novels but has a many slight but significant differences such as there is a real need/reason for the mc wanting to become the strongest

ahmed_waleed_1200
ahmed_waleed_1200Lv5ahmed_waleed_1200

Keep writing so good, and more more more more more more more more more chapter, thanks for your hard working, I hope you can continue to write this nove.

mmatthew
mmatthewLv14mmatthew

I really enjoy this book. While it’s not entirely original with systems and transmigration, it does have a unique twist to it, no signs of a harem, which I like (seriously why do they have harems, you’re writing for antisocial men, and women, neither of which are interested in reading about a guy sleeping around with 7 women). It defiantly has my attention

The_last_Guardin
The_last_GuardinLv14The_last_Guardin

I relly like the concept of this novel it s not like that it s the first time seeing a novwl with it but i think this one is well made. For me everythink thats more than 7 chapters a week is good so no problems for me there to. Overall we haven t seen that much of the world and charackters but it s only chapter 50. One think i relly liked was the kidnapping of donis nice idea

DevilBox
DevilBoxLv2DevilBox

Amazing so far, loving the attitude and the progression. Keep up the good work, thanks for alleviating my birdie during this Quarantine. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

FatihKrsmn
FatihKrsmnLv10FatihKrsmn

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Serious_Reader
Serious_ReaderLv4Serious_Reader

A good story so far but felt rushed from MC getting kidnaped till arc end hope author will slow down a bit and author should give a overview of the said world power system overall good reading exp

elano77
elano77Lv12elano77

Wow, what a story. Most times, when authors write a fantasy novel, especially one with a system in it, they tend to get caught up in the fantasy and end up with a stale, static novel whose characters and world are unrealistic. This novel does not make the same mistake. It is dynamic with world-building that is measured and deliberate. The story does not have any logical holes and you can flow really well with it and its characters. The characters are largely realistic and multifaceted. The only issue with the story is that most of the other characters are not fleshed out enough. We do not know their backgrounds or motivations which makes it more difficult to connect with them fundamentally. There have been slight improvements to this in recent chapters but it still is not there yet. All in all, I would highly recommend for anyone into fantasy because, system or no, this novel is spectacular.

NecromikReal
NecromikRealLv13NecromikReal

Not bad System Novel with High Mana and magic action and development. Reincarnated on magic world from simple earth life? (Light Spoiler alert. ............................................................. Really? No.........not so simple.....well played Author San!

Aila_DainVito
Aila_DainVitoLv14Aila_DainVito

💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟💟 This is a freaken awesome book! Keep up the good work!

Aila_DainVito
Aila_DainVitoLv14Aila_DainVito

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sah
sahLv13sah

Good

FREEPALESTINEplz
FREEPALESTINEplzLv14FREEPALESTINEplz

Love it. Please keep writing (:

EnderPL
EnderPLLv6EnderPL

Writing quality and stability of updates is good so 5* But the rest... ehhh... Story is cliche reincarnation and being genius in magic. Nicely written and all. The Mc as a child is really beta but in a nice way. Then he is kidnapped and suffers. The author did preparation to upgrade his way of thinking. But the Mc didn’t change at all! He is still a genius, he is still useless even with all the magic and weapon training! He again almost dies and the only thing he’s good at is crying! He is afraid of authority and is shaking when meeting a normal guard but is able to speak leisurely with the strongest mages in his region! Really it’s a nice read if you’re not expecting anything but even till chapter 70 the Mc is beta. Not worth wasting time if you’re waiting for the Mc to change.

praco74
praco74Lv15praco74

Very good novel so far the world building seems very solid the grammar is good .At the beginning it look like supreme magus but it is NOT about a psycopath in a magic world Overall good novel so far

Ilham_Fian_06
Ilham_Fian_06Lv3Ilham_Fian_06

I love this novel because every chapter of it is satisfying so it make me endure with the waiting time for update and the cursed cliff hanger

TanoshimiSubete
TanoshimiSubeteLv4TanoshimiSubete

Really a great book to be honest. One where you actually don't know what is going to happen. Great stuff tbh. 10/10 for everything. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

BigNovelBigDream
BigNovelBigDreamLv1BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

poke_predator07
poke_predator07Lv2poke_predator07

Best book I have ever read..................................................................................................................

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