Magic Force

I like this story a lot. The characters all have unique personalities and traits, plus the powers always seem to be imaginative and fun. Colt is probably my favorite with his overpowered magic and lazy/mean attitude, it makes his character seem multilayered and like he's hiding something underneath. The writing is also very well done and unlike many other novels, there are not many grammar mistakes. This one is definitely one of my favorites from this author and I hope it continues and isn't dropped like the others.

Amazing aye! :D First off, the writing is great, with few to no mistakes hehe! <3 I would suggest writing who's speaking like "he/she said" instead of using "(name)", but that's totally optional and subjective hehe! :D For updates, no complaints here, good job! :D The concept itself is very interesting to me, exactly my cup of tea lol, destruction, war, and humanity on the brink of extinction, but with magic! Chef's kiss! :D The characters are also fleshed-out and unique, so me likey! For world-building, absolutely great ayeee, would love to know more about what will happen hehe! Great job, author! <3

Love the way this is written. A nice light read, sort of a screenplay and novel hybrid, which suits this adventure perfectly. Humor is used to good effect throughout with some amusing dialogue, banter and interactions. Full marks for the ambitious world building. The author does a great job introducing the reader into this new, unfamiliar world where monsters have taken over country sides and non-populated areas, and monster hunters fight to keep order. Great work so far. I will be sure to keep on reading further with this one.

Love this magic Force team you are building. I don't think I've ever read a book with a superhero team actually being present. You always assume their the superhero team, but in this is flat out tells you lol .Paragraphing is perfection, and I think you have excelled at that. As a reader I love when the story flows, and I think you have achieved that here!!!! I do want to mention I am the user BellsandLexShow on the forum!!! Best of wishes to you and look forward from reading more of your story!!!

Its a very interesting world setting! I really recommend this! World setting and characters very impressive!

After only reading those five chapters, I honestly declare that I am totally hooked. The style of writing is totally wonderful, it makes it way easier to get attached to the story. Can't imagine where the plot of the story is going to, but can't help to wait for more.

Awesome Novel. Your writing quality is good and is very easy to read. I hope that you would just make it normal when someone is conversing. Instead of putting their names at the end, you could have just mentioned it as 'He/She said.' Although your writing style looks unique, some readers won't prefer that. Your story has a lot of potentials, so try polishing it and it will turn into a hidden gem one day!

This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and Hard work accompanied with skills, this will fare well in the future! Kudos and congrats! May your novel prosper in the future! ......from review swap

Its a pretty good one, the start was good only the name ticks me off a bit but it I guess it fits since they're sorcerers and not magi, good job and well done author.

I love your way of showing who's talking and it makes things very easy to read for anybody. I love your detail in your work especially because it is a fantasy based and it puts a really good imagine in a readers head which makes the read overall more enjoyable. Keep up the great work!

Very enjoyable read. Would recommend. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I like the story the synopsis is also good and the character is well delivered. I can't critique your grammars for I'm not an expert on English and is not my first language the English hahaha but over all good work author-nim more ink to your pen! <3

So far I've read a few chapters and I can say this is definitely a good read. I can't wait to read more keep it up![img=recommend][img=coins]