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Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

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Synopsis

The second version. Agriculture is a very interesting activity. Like the sale of products. Not to mention the cooking, healing cooking. The development of tourism. All this will be in this novel. Perhaps the continuation of the first novel, but not a fact. What is the story about? The story of a graduate student who decided to become a farmer. He sold his apartment and started to run his business with the money he received. Farm, online shop, farm shop. Decided to sell organic food. Who is this guy? Former student of the Faculty of History. His relatives are historians and artisans, scientists. Great-grandfather Farmer. Grandfather - oriental sweets manufacturer. His ancestor ... Dara is the hero of another novel "'Jiang' Magic Coin" ... What happens to him? He finds magic coins that have already become a magic entity, he has an all-powerful system. The main character does not immediately use it ... Why should I care? It is interesting. But not at once. Not from the first pages, there is interesting historical information, there is an understanding of everyday life, traditions, oriental subtleties of doing business. Almost reality but in a fantastic wrapper. Pros - good content, many different historical facts about the Silk Road, Eastern Trade, Household reflections on politics and economics, there are interesting ideas for organizing your own business in tourism and farming. Cons - bad form, that is, the text of the novel is rough, grammar and syntax is lame. There are mistakes. Overall assessment of the story if to be objective: Writing Quality - 2 stars Stability of Updates - 4 stars (3-4 times per week from 500 to 3000 words for one chapter) Story Development - 4 stars Character Design - 3 stars World Background - 3 stars Overall result: Who wants to learn new things about farming and about the world after the Cold War, who is interested in the first place content, can be sure that he/she will not waste his/her time in vain. Whoever likes the good form of the syllable, he/she can immediately leave, having pulled his hat, striking his/her horse sideways with spurs, plunge into the depths of the prairie. Tags - Farming, Cooking, Health, Folk Medicine, Magic, History ----------------------------- This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

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Chapter 1Description, character and the world in which Dara lives

Dara, an Asian, a resident of the East. The eye color is black, the hair color is black. Height 1 meter 90 cm. Weight 80 kg. Athletic. Tanned, like everyone who is in the summer on the street at 50 degrees Celsius in the shade.

Graduate - National University, major in history. He studied at the department - Silk Road, Trade, Agriculture.

He studied at the farm, helped his uncle, grew vegetables and berries. He sold them on the market.

He has many relatives, as is customary in the East, that part of the East where Dara lives.

Dara is a believer, despite the fact that his grandfather is an atheist, communist, retired secret police general.

Even more, he turned out to be a descendant of the cunning and treacherous Dara, from Jiang's Magic Coin.

Dara, is a strong, moderately brave, sometimes reasonable coward. An admirer of Sima Tsan and Chinese military strategy, a researcher of Chan Buddhism, and the comprehension of the bright Tao.

Temperament, Dara, was quick-tempered, emotional, he appreciated justice and acutely felt it. But as he gained life experience, Dara learned to restrain himself. From a maximalist, he turned into an eastern resident. And they are in no hurry to speak.

In society, Dara liked to communicate, to find common topics for conversation. But on the other hand, he loved to be silent, watch from the side. This was his contradiction.

Modern world. But at the same time, he switched from socialism to a feudal monopoly.

The country is a former principality, then the emirate, Small-An, once included in the realm of TSAO once in the time of the Tang era.

The territory of the country is 380 square meters. km.

The capital is called AN, the number of inhabitants is 1 million people.

70 percent of the desert and plains, 30 percent of the mountains.

The highest point is 6300 meters, the lowest is 100 meters.

State management is carried out through clans and groupings.

Close trade, economic and political relations with China, Iran, and Arab countries.

Moreover, the country has a very expensive Internet, a country on the outskirts of the civilized world. Priority is not given to science and technology, but to craft and tourism.

Once, Small-An, as part of the second empire, had its own construction plants - space satellites, fighters and helicopters, tanks. But over the years of independence, over 40 years, Small-An has lost both factories and specialists. All of their knowledge and projects were sold to the West.

Out of 100,000 scientists, engineers, and workers, only 20,000 remained. Moreover, these were more old people, pensioners, and scientists of pre-retirement age.

The average salary in the capital was $ 250 and in the prefectures only $ 80-90.

Small-An during the second empire was an economically developed country, part of the Superpower, the second in the world in economics and the first in arms.

Over the 40 years of independence, Small-An has become a third world country, without the high-tech industry, without the military-industrial complex.

Youth appreciated Western culture, but they perceived it superficially, not understanding the essence of freedom and responsibility. The old generation saw the West as their enemy. The middle generation did not care about the West and the ideology. They wanted to live and live well, just working and doing their business. They did not care about politics.

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Table des matières
Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :Starting a business and manifesting magic on the farm
Volume 2 :Technical issues and other
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Writing Quality -There is consistency when it comes to vivid descriptions. (I've said it in the chapter comments but I'll say it here too:)) -I have no right to tell whether this book has typos or errors when it comes to grammar since I'm not good at grammar as well. -I didn't notice any misspelled words/terms -Well for me, the writing style has caught my attention Stability of update -It looks like that the author updates daily since it says that this book has been recently updated 19hrs ago World background -I have no complaints when it comes to this category. -The world background is amazing, there are instances wherein the author uses facts and trivia (Well they sound like facts to me so I'm assuming they are) Character Development -I love the characteristics of the characters, but by far Dara is my favorite -The author describes the characters in a vivid way, giving readers an easier time to imagine how they look. Story Development -It doesn't seem to be rushed nor does it seem to be slow. The novel has a perfect pace. -Despite the long chapters, there are paragraphs that motivates the readers to continue reading. Overall: The story is unique. I highly recommend this novel to those who have a passion for cooking or for those who excel in agriculture. Those who aren't that good with cooking and agriculture, however, I still suggest them to read this novel since they can learn a lot from this book. The author updates lately so the readers won't be left behind. The author has also profound knowledge when it comes to the economy, recipes, and agriculture. I am not very observant on grammar, so I can't really say if there are typos or errors. Anyways, keep up the good work author!

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I wouldn't really call this work a novel or fiction, but a documentary--even though the characters, the plots, the stage where it all happened are made up and semi-fictional, it is distinctively written in documental style, like someone is filming MC's career as a farmer for academic purpose: because you can read everything MC thought and every step he took as detailedly as possible, to the degree that you will know the exact weight of each agricultural product. It reminds me of the business cases I read in college: realistic, narrative records that take down all the information about how people start their business and make decisions that is useful in a business research sense. That's my general impression of this book, a business case about a farming enterprenuer in fictional world. Which leads me to the problems. Obviously, you have to give credits to author's extraordinary knowledge of an amazingly wide range of subjects--It's rare and exciting, as a Chinese myself, to see someone who's so familiar with our culture. This requires a great amount of research, something that only someone with the spirit of old-time naturalists and a pure, noble curiosity can achieve. However, the core nature of novel--this form of literature work--is drama, theatricality, conflicts, suspense, which is something this book is lacking. The author focuses too much on presenting the details and knowledge in a way as realistic as possible, that he seems to forget he's writing a novel and telling a story to his readers, instead of making a research report to a group of scholars. And though I sense this may contradict with the author's ideology of writing, to make the story dramatic, theatrical, gripping, one has to rely on exaggeration and distortion, which means to some degree, to "disrespect" reality and knowledge. A novelist may omit something that does not serve a role in the plots and burden the pace of story progress, even if it's scientific and educational, and may add something that increases the intense of conflicts and the uniqueness of characters, even if it's totally meaningless in reality. The story always comes first. Certainly, reality also plays a significant role in this, but its function--to use a metaphor of stage show scenario--is like the costumes and accessories the actors wear to make them look closer to the characters they play, the props, paintings and murals used on the background to give the audience a feeling of immersion, and actors' vivid, lively expressions and tunes to convince the viewers their emotions are real, so real that even the viewers will deeply sympathize with them, and cry or laugh. The status of reality in novels is always an honored guest in the house that makes the party cooler, but not the host, and that's the case even in realistic novels. So what I am suggesting is that the author either changes his direction into a completely realistic, documentary area--e.g. it will be very interesting for me to read about how author himself travels into different countries and learn about all sorts of rare knowledge of local cultures and his thoughts of it; or tries harder on the "novel" part of the novel. I would recommend the first one much more personally, because I have the impression that the author has an evident researcher personality, so the first one would be a better fit for your nature XD

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