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Lux Ortus Academy : The Gricius

Auteur: Ar7_Storm
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Lisez le roman Lux Ortus Academy : The Gricius écrit par l'auteur Ar7_Storm publié sur WebNovel. ... ...Brandon and Amber exchanged glances. Then Amber nodded, which followed by Brandon immediately push open the door.Right at that very moment, a black figure moved overhead past them.Something cra...

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... ... Brandon and Amber exchanged glances. Then Amber nodded, which followed by Brandon immediately push open the door. Right at that very moment, a black figure moved overhead past them. Something crawled and crept out of the door then moving upwards, while stick on the wall. It moved to the 2nd floor of a house that was full of messy things and furniture strewn around. Brandon who saw that immediately used Origin Spell, “Ezetra Inosus” (Lucent) which he aimed right at the path of the fast-moving black figure. At that instant, the wall in front of the black figure gave off a bright light that enveloped the room they were occupying. The black figure also felt a pain that seemed to tear a part of its soul, from the light that shine upon it. *Kraaaaa* It screamed. While Amber who saw the black figure, also immediately used the First level Rune, (Fetter). The black figure then seemed to bound by something that eye can touch. Then it fell where they had been standing, as Brandon and Amber were simultaneously and in sync, also dodging by moving back quickly. The figure crash over on the ground, but didn't make the slightest sound as it hit the floor. The true form of the black figure then revealed. A Spirit that had its head split in the middle, revealing its split brain. With blood dripping, but not fall down and leaving marks on the floor. It was as if the blood was dripping down, only to flow back up again. Its entire body was pale and bluish-purple. Its left ankle was cut to reveal roughly chopped bones, and the grayish flesh with a little bit of fat stuck to it, that was pale yellowish in color, as if something had grilled the leg over a fire, right after it was cut off... … To be continued… … ...

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Jaison_Arbor
Jaison_ArborLv2Jaison_Arbor

The world that the author has created is really cool and amazing, I love it, Brandon's personality is my favourite 😌, the history is remarkable, exciting for what will gonna happen👀 in the story further.good job author🍃

Ar7_Storm
Ar7_StormAuteurAr7_Storm

I kinda itchy. I'm using this novel for flexing and training. I thought my first novel somehow kinda messed up. So yeah. I'm shameless. I rate my own with 5, though it's just straight for me to call it, Impossible.

PrinceClover
PrinceCloverLv13PrinceClover

about the writing quality... i don't have much to say, since GODOFCAT already pointed out the mistake, which was THE TENSE, since it is very important in descriptive detail, which you were very good at... and i vote 4 stars is for updating stability, since i noticed that the last update was already 2 days ago.... and much more recommended for author to update at least 1 chap per day.... and I can't say anything much... ah... there was still the synopsis, just try to make it shorter like a hundred words and make it interesting... and i cant say anything much really... your world background is superb, the character design had life, and that's it.... continued updating author! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

GODOFCAT
GODOFCATLv2GODOFCAT

the author doesn't know what tenses he should use which is bad so decide what to use and stick with it I can see a lot of mistakes in the chapter but can be fixed try using a lot of showing than telling so try improving your grammar and description writing btw your storyline is interesting I mean really it's unique

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