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Love with liar

Auteur: Ott7
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Synopsis

A faithful girl whose name was xing wanwan. she was happy in life. For lifetime her family didn't treat well because she was a girl. Everything has belonged to her brother Love from parents, opportunities, or attention. But she was kindhearted so, she never complains or blamed her brother. One day, she meets her soulmate Lu tingxaio. He was the cold-hearted man. He never shows mercy. It will be interesting to see what God plan for them.

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Volume 1
Volume 2

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sandy_ctd
sandy_ctdLv14

I’m not sure if the story development in the original language is the same or due to faulty translation. Storyline should be good but it is a pain to read it. I tried two times to read it but it is more like a elementary student writing, and you really need good guessing what each sentence means.

6yr

Loopie36
Loopie36Lv15

First off great story line. The grammar needs work. As a reader I would like to enjoy the story instead of trying to figure out what you are getting at. Just the next time proof read before you post. Thanks for the story.

6yr
tsab
tsabLv15

Love it. So happy what happen next. Can we get more chapter in a day. The story is so good. I want more to read. Spoiler.. love novel like this where every page is interesting.

6yr
vinzlurz
vinzlurzLv11

The plot of the story is quite interesting but there are too much grammar errors..it feels like I'm a toddler talking when I read it loud.. Please edit it properly..thank you

6yr
swagstares
swagstaresLv5

Révéler le spoiler

6yr
jeenx
jeenxLv3

I like the story line. it is geeting interesting. There are some grammar mistake like improper use of verb and tense.....You can improved slowly and I hope you will keep posting

6yr
Loopie36
Loopie36Lv15

There are a lot of grammar mistakes in the storyline. You need to make some punctuation correction as well. Make sure that the space between the words are better and the you use the correct pronouns where they need to be. But great story.

6yr

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