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Lost Memories: Vanitas

Auteur: Aescwine
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Lisez le roman Lost Memories: Vanitas écrit par l'auteur Aescwine publié sur WebNovel. Synopsis:MEMORIES MAY BE EPHEMERAL BUT FEELINGS ARE ETERNAL!The world has been plunged into chaos as the seven great demons have assumed the stage in the world of the mortals. They have ravaged countr...

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Synopsis: MEMORIES MAY BE EPHEMERAL BUT FEELINGS ARE ETERNAL! The world has been plunged into chaos as the seven great demons have assumed the stage in the world of the mortals. They have ravaged countries and slaughtered every living being in sight. However, humanity has not lost hope as they use the power of the demons against them. Amidst this chaos is a boy who has no memories of what he was before though he continues to kill demons after demons in the hope of finding the answer to his unknown question. Follow the journey of Vanitas as he tries to piece together his memories and finds a shocking truth about the demons and God. THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I AM WRITING FANTASY SO THERE MAY BE SHORTCOMINGS HERE AND THERE. SO, I WANT YOU GUYS TO POINT THEM OUT OF YOU FIND ANY SO I CAN IMPROVE! I DON'T OWN THE COVER ART! IF THE CREATOR WANTS ME TO REMOVE THEIR WORK OR CREDIT THEM PLEASE CONTACT ME HERE: AESCWINE2002@GMAIL.COM

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Aescwine
AescwineAuteurAescwine

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LunaArsyn
LunaArsynLv2LunaArsyn

The world building in this novel is awesome. It really should get converted into a Webcomic, it will engage more readers like that. Please continue writing more and more chapter... will be waiting for more and then come back again. ^^

Bookworm401
Bookworm401Lv1Bookworm401

I need more chapters and fast. Please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .....................................................

Imma_eat_you_up
Imma_eat_you_upLv1Imma_eat_you_up

Waiting for more chapters so I can eat this novel up. Will put a new review after it has more chapters. All I can say now is that the tags interested me.

Doctor_Strange_3482
Doctor_Strange_3482Lv1Doctor_Strange_3482

Oh, one of my favourite authors writing a fantasy novel? I will be reading this of course. Really looking forward to this man! Good luck!!!!!!

Destiny_is_cruel
Destiny_is_cruelLv1Destiny_is_cruel

The pacing is slow but not that bad. Many characters have been introduced in the first few chapters which I guess will have a lot of impact to the story later. Nothing else to say right now except that it can go anywhere. But it has a lot of potential!

Nouzen_Kazehawa
Nouzen_KazehawaLv1Nouzen_Kazehawa

The chapters are moving at a slow pace and we get to see something about magic only after six chapters. Well I would let that slide since it is the beginning but I hope the story picks up pace.

RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4RomanceFanatic028

The plot is interesting but i think your chapters needs some editing. It has some punctuation problem but don't worry it happens to everyone. When i started my book it had many grammatical errors too. That's why i know you will edit it later on. And now talking about the protoganist Lucius. I find him very entertaining. That's why i would love to keep reading just for him. So by reading few chapters, i think you really did a great job.

Naysay3r
Naysay3rLv11Naysay3r

Hello, all I can say is that the story is alright, but the way you right is also okay, but there were a lot of punctuations that were lacking. By the way, keep updating constantly and more power to the author!

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0MashroomLv30Mashroom

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