Kisame

I am back again with another novel. Like the previous novel, I am translating this one chapter by chapter. So, I don't know what is going to happen. But I hope that this will be an enjoyable journey.

This is basically machine translated and slightly edited. even some paragraphs were the same as MTL.

A cheap story of arrogance. Author has no knowledge in chronology of events, geography of naruto world, story of kisame's life and of course proper logic. And when he started to explain, that kisame got away from pakura via jumping of cliff....that was last straw. 12 year old genin of genius kind don't know wall and water walking, especially kiri ninja and pakura not being able to climb down using wall walking and most of all, sensing a genin that hangs on a tree. And of course such stupid cliche of tree growing from cliff

thinking that that this fantastic fanfic is pretty dope and y’all should give it a try if you ever watch Naruto. The pace is amazing 🥲 keep up the solid work 🦈🦈

Looks good, pls don’t drop If you ever do romance don’t to it was a girl that has a partner in the original Naruto, it just feels weird.

it's your typical Chinese novel *male character sneezes in MC presence*MC kills him and his eight generations of ancestors and descendents. female character finds out about MC biggest secrets. MC sees himself in her and let her live after giving her a power up.there are already two love interests by chapter 13 so ........ yeah trash/garbage unless you are into that kinda stuff.

I'm going to stop at chapter 39. Kisame usual pattern is to find unique items to consume to alter/add abilities. He also has a habit of giving "monster cells," which make the eater obedient and more powerful (for some reason...) Maybe it'll be good later or fall apart. I don't find reading this enjoyable, and for the moment, I have no desire to see what happens next.

To be honest the MC is an idiot that does tings without thinking. Killing his teammates + 3 of the 7 swordsmen from the start twice and is the only one that comes back alive. No one does anything about it and “thinks he is inesense” Leaves the village for like a month with involving the musikage and comes back like nothings happened. So none of it makes sense for the Naruto world.

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This one is a really fun one. The translation is fine, no major issues from what I have read. As far as the story goes, I am really digging it as its from a view point I frankly have not seen before, considering 90% of Naruto FF are carbon clones of another. The panda system is a bit odd, but the author so far has made it work and it is more creative than the usual systems we tend get. As it is at this moment in time (c81), I would say it is worth a read.

Don’t drop plzzzzzz……………………. …….

Overall its okay would I recommend this idk honestly since the writing is good There just isn’t really any story development there’s only 13 chapters so far so might change but as of right now I don’t really enjoy the story. Don’t get me wrong the starting was good but after that idk

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The only problem i have with the story is the MC's personality. He seems so stupid sometimes that it's frustrating. He doesn't seem to take anything seriously, his fighting style just makes me wonder if this book is supposed to be comedy or something, he's constantly employing tactics such as throwing lime juice in people's eyes, putting laxatives in their food before they fight and ball kicking/eye pocking.I'm aware this is a translation, btw.

This is the first time I see an MC who take another path (Kun Peng) to become stronger rather than following Hagomoro path. Good story, I hope you can keep up the good work.

Even though i am forcing my hand to move to read this and its painful to read this i am somehow still reading it the magic of translated chinese stuff is that it works sometimes so uh thats it

Read it till chapter 20 & got hooked ,other than grammar error & Xianxia theme (it's TL btw) everything is fine i guess

So far, so good... I do like the content

it was good until ch 12, the author is clearly weak to women. I'm just disappointed, this is just my opinion.

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