Kaito Akaden (Kaito)

i admit minato is strong shinobi but when compared to otsutsuki he is pretty weak so the mc should focus on getting strong er then otsutsuki

This fanfic focuses on cannon to much to be truly enjoyable however its a decent time waster to due the author's good grammar and a above average MC just his obsession with naruto is shown a bit to much early on like naruto is his only hope like really?

The only good thing about the story is the writing and i like how mc trains and develops his jutsu but thats about it the story itself is not existing nothing is changed from the original and mc iq drops to -100 when its time to change the plot. Very frustrating to read and i hate that i wasted my night on reading this story

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No changes and constantly stating he cant find a way to change things so he will have to just hope. So dumb.

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Considering that nothing changed and the mc was just agonizing on it while commiting only minimal actions to change things, I think you should just skip the things you don't want to change until the part where you want to make changes. You know, people will just accuse you of rehashing canon.

It is by far one of the fanfics I have read. The main character is really very satisfying. He is more than just an idiot. I recommend it to everyone who wants to read it.

El mejor fanfic que eh leído se apega a la obra original pero cuenta una nueva historia definitivamente está en mi top de fanfic en general. Excelente obra

The novel progresses at a very slow pace, particularly during the training sections. You could easily skip through these parts by reading just a few paragraphs to get the general idea. The main story truly begins with Naruto's birth, though some chapters following this are quite tedious. Additionally, I hope to see some romance incorporated into the storyline to enhance its appeal. well that's my take on this novel. Rest is up too you to decide

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I'm blown away by your SI fanfic! It's the best I've ever come across. Your writing style is captivating, and your ideas are truly original. Keep up the amazing work!

There are, in my opinion, a few issues concerning how the main character behaves. He is portrayed as a cunning and wise character. However, he tends to act rash and only seem cunning because everyone else somehow forgets they posses thinking capacity of their own when he speaks. Besides that, his personality is an odd and somewhat unbalanced mix between a child and an adult.

Thanks for the episode. Is this book a translation? If it is translated, what is the original name? Jdjdjsjsjdjsjsdjsjsjdkskskdkdkskdkkdjdkdkdkfkfkfk

I've been keeping up with the story. it's good. I enjoy it. for anyone reading this review. know that this story is an enjoyable read. If I may offer some critique. 1. it's not dark enough. this is the Shinobi world. people are killed and die all the time. realism and edginess. weariness in characters. manipulation. hiding abilities, backstabbing. it's lacking severely in this department. even with the whole Minato death and danzo thing. 2. kushina loses her Chakra and she suddenly becomes a helpless woman that needs to be coddled and cared for by her prepubscent son. she has no regards for her kids safety. no attempt to help him succeed so he can protect himself. she's like some ditsy wallflower that's living in some romcom 3. maybe try reading wind of calamity... see how the author narrates the character growing in power and technique. how realistic he makes it and how easy it is to follow along and invest in their growth. could help you a lot

its a very good story, i hope you'll continue it.Plz dont drop it.And also update a bit more i want more chapters!!!!☺☺☺

Es una buena historia, el autor tiene buena gramática y un MC bien desarrollado mayor al promedio, solo espero que no siga tan fiel al cannon, que tenga una mayor variable e influya más en los demás de acuerdo a su fuerza 👌🏻

I know Author is new to writing story and I can see it in early chapters and I can see the improvement from chapter 1 to chapter 73 but still something is missing in this fanfic. Maybe the characters isn't that flesh out? or the style of writing is kinda average? I don't know. But when I compare this to 'The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima' The story becomes kinda pale, I hope the author take some tips or inspiration from other successful story or fanfic and try to improve the story and his writing style. I am giving this 5 star because I like this fanfic very much and I hope the author improves and continue to make good chapters.

A única coisa que não gostei foi sobre o interesse amoroso do protagonista, se houvesse ao menos um autor que faça adequadamente uma história do protagonista x konan , mesmo que não seja harém valeria a pena , embora exista muitos que odeiam que o prota tenha mais de uma mulher ou harém, parece que esqueceram o tipo de mundo em que vivem e que podem morrer a qualquer hora, sem mencionar que qual é o problema se o protagonista tiver 2 ou 3 esposa ele tem habilidade, força, riqueza e tudo o mais e pode cuidar e amar suas mulheres adequadamente sem faltar nada para ninguém, no existe aqueles que dizem que o protagonista está coletando mulher como se fossem pokémon.👎