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infinite loop

Auteur: darklord9999
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Lisez le roman infinite loop écrit par l'auteur darklord9999 publié sur WebNovel. It's a story of some random neet/shut-in/otaku who is enjoying his life as it's now the pandemic 2020 and everyone just stays in their houses mostly and wouldn't leave them.He just sleeps mostly and w...

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It's a story of some random neet/shut-in/otaku who is enjoying his life as it's now the pandemic 2020 and everyone just stays in their houses mostly and wouldn't leave them. He just sleeps mostly and watches anime/manga/light novels and doesn't listen to his classes, they are too boring for him, but on a specific day he gets called by a mysterious person and all that he can hear is "###**##*#*hs" and some gibberish.

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