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INDRA

Fantasy
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What is INDRA

Lisez le roman INDRA écrit par l'auteur Utkarshuniyal publié sur WebNovel. after trying so many times, a couple couldn't get a child. then they make a wish to a legendary dragon, and their wish is fulfilled. is that child, normal or not?...

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after trying so many times, a couple couldn't get a child. then they make a wish to a legendary dragon, and their wish is fulfilled. is that child, normal or not?

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sandeep_uniyal
sandeep_uniyalLv1sandeep_uniyal

I think for a new author it's good starting is good I am looking forward for the next chapter to realeas I hope it will become good with story in future

White_lotus1897
White_lotus1897Lv1White_lotus1897

The development of the story is doing pretty well, the start was also very good. I like how the story is going. Can't wait to read the next chapter.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Utkarshuniyal
UtkarshuniyalAuteurUtkarshuniyal

hlo friends, it's my first time writing the noval. I hope you like it. You would think that MC is childish from the beginning but it is not.

Stephanie_Rasanya_1576
Stephanie_Rasanya_1576Lv10Stephanie_Rasanya_1576

I can only see the Grammer mistakes revolving around the story, I hope that you can correct them and make the story better, please use the punctuations correctly. I feel like the word arrangement in most of the sentences is wrong, This story yet has a long way to go. I hope that you can take some time to look into your mistakes. Hope that you will become a better writer. All the things I have written are according to my point of view ( the way that others see this book might be different) Good Luck for your future.

Sumayya_Riaz
Sumayya_RiazLv2Sumayya_Riaz

Good story. I appreciate the story of this novel. 👍👍👍. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Ashley7Black
Ashley7BlackLv1Ashley7Black

It is great that the updates are consistent but the author has a lot of room for development . The plot idea is good but description of events is not that good (in accordance with me) Well it is still a nice story.

Lancee
LanceeLv1Lancee

The story has potential for development, the idea behind it is fascinating The story itself is not bad, a fine plot. A nice theme and the picture created is visible but it's still needs works. In conclusion a good read

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