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In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park

THIS IS MADE AFTER WATTPAD TRAUMATIZED ME. So to save and protect other people eyes. i took it in my hands to make a lookism fanfic. Without Any Lg Sh*T. The fanfic is pretty simple. A guy die. Guy meet Rob. Guy spin wheel. Guy gets To be A system. And gets the Perfect body Of Daniel park. Guy happy. Now the guy makes changes in the plot. He will show why Charles took interest in the second body. He will show what is the ture power of it. Wannna know what happens when you send a guy with as a system and gave him hack's. Read to find out. Welcome to my fanfic. Hope you will stick with me to the end of it.

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Chapter 23 : The battle End

Recap a little. The fight between james and little daniel ended , With james begin the winning one , But little daniel damaged him a lot in a single strike. With the ending of their fight, we turned our attention to the fight of Baki and system. With both fighters going all out. With all cards on the deck get ready for the ultimate showdown.

Story starts here :

The attention of the audience is glued to the center of the arena. There, Baki and System stood, their auras clashing like great force of nature. The air itself seemed to tremble in anticipation of the battle that was about to unfold.

Baki cracks his neck, looking at system with serious eyes. System with emotion less eyes also looking back at him,

Both fighters looking at each other, can feel that the fight that will happen now will end with one standing.

Baki's muscles rippled, His Standing revealed the demon on his back, The speciality known of the hanma blood, whenever the back is shown, It ends with an hanma winning.

fight can end in seconds. The blood of hanma inside him had awakened, and it demanded for an ultimate challenge. Looking at the opponent who pushed him this far. He is also waiting to test the powers of the Black eyes Or UI.

System, in his Ultra Instinct form, was the pinnacle of opposition he had been seeking. System, his eyes now a deep void of black with white irises, was ready. His power had reached an unprecedented level. The battle between perfection and Demon is about to begin.

The audience watched in silent awe as the two warriors faced off. Katsumi, Retsu, Doppo, Tokugawa, and Shibusawa, observing with varying degrees of excitement and concern.

They had seen Baki's growth over the years, but this was something different, something beyond their wildest expectations.

Yujiro, seated high above in the stands, grinned with satisfaction. Knowing how could baki be defeated. He was made to challenge him self. Now, This was time for Baki to prove it. Was yuijiro decision to make baki correct or wrong.

System taking offense throws the first punch , like a lightning bolt splitting the sky. The Spectators barely had time to register the movement as Baki and System clashed with incredible speed and power. Their fists met with thunderous force, causing shockwaves to through out the arena.

Every time they fists were dodge or countered. Ordinary people cannot see it. But the fighters who can follow the fight. Can barley see it, The fight was like a graceful dance, Each dodge each counter, The timing of which its performed is enchanting, like an illusion but they all well know.

This dance is not a common dance. It's a dance of death, So much danger no one can think they can last a move against either of em. One wrong step will decide the out come

The spectators watched in awe as the battle unfolded. Baki's raw power and System's unparalleled speed created a dynamic exchange of blows. Each fighter adapted to the other's moves, countering with precision and agility the whole fight changed their views.

Doppo seeing such feat. Said with sweat on his forehead, "I've never seen anything like this before. Both's strength is otherworldly ".

Katsumi nodded, his eyes fixed on the battle. "Indeed, To push baki to this extent we all underestimate System's capabilities. He's a formidable opponent ".

Retsu watched with the fight without taking his eyes off it, saying. "This is a clash of titans, my friends. And it's far from over ".

No one in the whole arena wanted to take of theirs eye's of the fight even for a nanosecond. It's like everyone forgot to blink.

As the battle raged on, Baki's demon giving him an advantage in strength and speed, The battle pushing baki to new heights. Not wanting to be left behind by baki, UI using all body potential pushing the body in extreme state to match baki strength and speed . The very ground beneath them trembled from the sheer force of their clash.

Both fighters notice a gap in each other defense. With lighting speed attacked at the same time. Punching the face of each other. But both dodge the attack as the cheeks are grazed, stopping the onslaught of attacks. Both fighters look at each other.

Baki with a smile feeling the thrill of battle, The UI mode which renders the user emotion less, Shows a little smile shocking the all arena. Form the grazed area a drop of bloods flows down dropping on the floor. The moment that drop touched the floor both fighters with a new found. Determination to win struck each other,

Baki with a knee strike. System with a punch to the face, Both fighters blocks the attack at the same time pushing both back. Rushing each other again kicks and punches are thrown, aiming at each other vital spots, The force of attacks are enough one clean strike can render one of them use less.

Baki keeping his advantage of demon back, and demon brain can process the fight better. And is pushing system back, Only with Instinct was system keeping up.

System, too, was pushed to his limits. His Ultra Instinct form adapted to Baki's growing power, but the as the battle ranged on. It was clear system was slowly losing the advantage. The two fighters were slowly evenly matched. One was for an unkown reason weakening, each landing powerful blows and dodging attacks that would have been fatal to lesser opponents.

The crowd was on the edge of their seats, their hearts pounding with every strike. It was a battle of gods, a spectacle that would be talked about for generations.

In the midst of the fight, Baki noticed his opponent getting slow, Not knowing the reason. But not slowing down baki lands sharp kick on the middle section of the system. A single strike was enough to give baki the edge. Landing multiple strikes on the system.

Looking this sudden change in the pace of the fight.not knowing what happened, Katsumi begin the youngest is confused out of the whole group.

But tokigawa and rest knows the reason for the sudden weakening of the system. Asking them "Hey what just happened. Why did he slow down like this, is he trying to trick baki. Making him think he is weak".

Tokigawa responds to katsumi comment " The fight has been happening for an hour. While we are sitting and speaking our thoughts. These 2 are fighting with determination to win, It's was destined form the start one will tire out. And we are looking one getting tired".

Doppo adds "You got a lot to learn more katsumi. The guy who challe.. Daniel who challenged baki to a fight. He just didn't had enough experience. While having sharp mind and talent, he overestimated his body ability to keep up. Many times during the fight he did not watched his body stamina capacity, at the end he started to watch his stamina, but he was to late. To conserve causing his down fall". Retsu and shibusawa nodding on doppo words.

With sudden revelation, Baki summoned every ounce of his strength and unleashed a devastating combination of strikes. System tried to counter. The strikes which was coming at him with blinding speed. He countered many but some managed to land. Staggering him

Summoning the remaining strength both started their final clash sending shockwaves throughout the arena, shattering the ground beneath them. Seeing the opening baki struck mercilessly Baki's punch connected with System's chest, and for a moment, time seemed to stand still. After the strike was connected. Time seemed to move like normal again.

System's body went limp, and he collapsed to the ground. Baki, victorious, stood over his fallen opponent. The audience erupted into thunderous applause, their cheers echoing through the arena.

As Baki not needing to catch his breath smile. "You're a true warrior," Baki said, his voice filled with admiration. With the cheers of the crowd, No seem to notice the changes that are happening inside the Big Body of daniel.

Most people don't realize the importance of ideals. Many people underestimate the ideals and how much weight does ideal have. A ideal could be anything either for good, bad, or selfish ideals.

Now most you must be wondering why am I talking about Ideals, system also had a ideal, Before He was sent to the lookism. He also had an ideal, to become a successful man, But his death suppressed that ideal not erasing it.

This fight remined the system how he was once a man with flesh and blood. And How currently he is using the second body of daniel park. Which has many secrets hidden, Even now we can see something like a miracle happening, The Gift which rob gave is now coming in the play, The perfect Body Which is created, Not born But created. With many secret hidden in the body.

Now all of you maybe wondering what is the secret that is hidden in the body ,The body stands up. The people in the arena are shocked to silence with no one daring to make a sound.

The change started, As it is visible to naked eyes of all, Muscle starts to move, The movement feels mesmerizing shocking many in the arena, With characters like retsu , doppo, shibisawa, with not believing their eyes. As the mouths katsumi and tokigawa are wide open.

The change also shocked baki and yujiro, As yuijiro eyes looking at daniel with disbelieve. Trying to find the flaws but finding none, With a wide grin. He starts to feel the need to fight him and put him to his place.

Taking a stance the battle is restarted. Baki is attacked with Invisible attack which he dodges. But is hit in the face with a left hook. Trying to counter. He is then hit in the gut by a knee strike. Sweeping baki legs, tripping him as another strike is delivered to his gut. Forcing him in the ground. Grabbing his hair Pulling it up knee striking baki in the face.

Baki who is now pushed once again trys to kick daniel in the face with back of his foot. Forcing him to dodge. Giving time to baki to get up. Locking eyes once again, Baki says "You're a monster with human skin you know that, and I specialize in monster hunting". Not getting any response in return.

Baki sees system rush him trying to punch him in the face, But soon realizes it's a fake, The traget was never the face but baki's arms. As then he is akido once again with a spinning back kick baki is throwed in the arena walls.

Seeing all this the reaction of the characters are strange tokigawa can't gater words to say. Katsumi rubbing his eyes and doubting that if he is in a dream. Retsu, doppo , shibusawa. All are shocked in a trance, with not a single word spoken but all having the same thought 'Monster'.

Baki gets out of the wall with bleeding, showing major signs of damage, Baki gets in an stance, of Using cockroach dash, The move he recently learned at full power to smash into daniel, due to the first time baki using the technique he ignores the fact that his enemy grab his head and put him in the ground.

With daniel instinct in the high gear he uses Retaekwondoo Dragon catcher, This technique wraps the users leg around the enemy head, with a spinning motion and smashing his head in the ground.

With baki speed this technique proves extra useful. Resulting in a huge shock wave, with huge amount of bleeding form baki head. Delivering huge damage to baki, as he struggles to get back on his feet he sees system punching him in the face with a punch forcing him back in the ground.

Baki never felt this suppressed in a fight except fighting his father, Its like the enemy knows what he will do and how will he do it. The disadvantage does not discourage baki. But forcing him to try new ways to defeat him.

Standing up once gain he gathers all his strength in taking the stance of "Triceratops Fist", Another move saved to fight aginst his father, Both fighters getting ready to decide the outcome in one single move.

System using retaekwondoo recoil less kick, And baki Triceratops Fist. The fist gives baki to attack with enough force to move a car. Re taekwondo recoil less is a kicking technique forcing all of the users strength in a single kicking motion.

The 2 moves colide creating a huge sock wave comparable to 5 grenades exploding at the same time, Damaging all the arena walls with some debris hitting people, But not one people ran or moved, All are waiting to see the out come of the battle.

The dust clears with baki on the ground with a huge gash on his chest like its made form a knife, And system leg bending the wrong way and arms which were used to parry the attack bending the wrong ways. Following baki steps system also falls on the ground.

With this the character card copies all the abilities of baki.

The story ends here,

This fight was soo hard to write like baki had many techniques he did not used in this fight, I nerfed baki, I repeat I nerfed baki in this fight. And the gift of the rob was sending little daniel see the fight between both of them, I orignally decided to use the gift of rob to buff the second body, But character card. Made it hard for me to buff him even more.

Leave a comment and tell me where I have gone wrong. See you all next time. Have a good day and night. 

I know the chapter is really bad, i apologize for it, but i did not get enough sleep. I only slept for 3 hours and am drowsining while writing this hope you all forgive me.

Have a good day or night peace.