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i am in marvel copy MTL

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During the Second World War, Kyle looked at Captain America standing straight and proud before him. Suddenly, a series of skill cards appeared. 「Pistol Master」 「Martial Arts Master」 「Shield Defense Master」 「Super Soldier Serum」 Which skill card do you wish to extract? “Wait… what? This golden finger… you must be pulling my leg! Not only skill cards but I can also extract super-powered skills like the Super Soldier Serum? Mother of God… what is this?!” this is not my all the credit to owner i just copy from websites

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black_lordd
black_lorddLv4black_lordd

u make no effort in correcting the grammar , what the point of all this chapters, just stop u only making a joke of ur self . .

Axes
AxesLv5Axes

It is readable, but it is a terrible read nonetheless. The wording is messed up in most places and sometimes the words are doubled. I have also seen a story so similar to this it is insane, called (Card Extraction System) The Mc has the same name, it starts off in the same way and with the same people. there do seem to be some changes but it is basically a copy of it.

Yorky_Man
Yorky_ManLv14Yorky_Man

if translated even half heartedly this would have been a decent read. but no they coudnt be bothered and so am giving them a s##t score......

ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13ArtoriaPendragon_

It’s almost impossible to understand

Malik_Irfan
Malik_IrfanLv14Malik_Irfan

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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

Bad grammar, but readable 🤷‍♂️ .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Crabble
CrabbleLv14Crabble

Grammer is soo bad it actually ruins the idea of the novel.

Silly_Goose77
Silly_Goose77Lv11Silly_Goose77

It is UNREADABLE its rlly bad and im sorry to say it. tho the idea is good the product is very much lacking

flame6669
flame6669Lv14flame6669

your story is good so far there many people that have done this but yours is really interested in I hope you continue writing your story my friend

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