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I'm The Pitiful Villain

Auteur: New_Leaf626
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Lisez le roman I'm The Pitiful Villain écrit par l'auteur New_Leaf626 publié sur WebNovel. As the man lay trapped within the twisted metal of the crashed car,Blood dripped out of his forehead.With each fading heartbeat, a tranquil sense of surrender washed over him, drawing him deeper into ...

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As the man lay trapped within the twisted metal of the crashed car, Blood dripped out of his forehead. With each fading heartbeat, a tranquil sense of surrender washed over him, drawing him deeper into death's embrace of darkness. In the eerie stillness, a sharp knock shattered the silence, jolting him back from the brink of oblivion. Confusion and dread mingled as he grappled with the notion of his own demise. Yet, defying all logic, when he summoned the strength to move and reluctantly pried open his eyes, he was met not with the void of death, but with a chilling revelation. He now inhabited the vessel of a villain, a sinister figure known as Alfonso Quiñones, his very essence intertwined with malevolence. Ps: I'm not a native English speaker so if there are any grammatical issues please do point them out (This is also my first novel so be patient with me) -My update is inconsistent but I will finish this book no matter how long it takes since I'm busy with school -No NTR -No Yuri (There might be incest in the future)

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Raphis
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Quite good for a start, but there are a few factors to consider. Try to expand your vocabulary, use sentences that can captivate the reader's interest, and in the last chapter, there's a lack of tension. You should create a scene with more clarity and detail so that readers will enjoy the conflicts and situations in your novel. Keep up the good work in your writing journey!

DaoistT6iO1q
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bro! Your novel constantly changing POV is really annoying. For me personally, the way you lead your story by constantly changing POV will interrupt the way I feel the story you want to show readers.😑😑😑

DaoistUdwfGJ
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overall your story is good but I hope it isn't about the game make it different and his 🤢 for commoners make it a curse that some1 did to him when he was young i hope he doesn't become an egy lord 😅 plus he's always on his thought like he could have killed the wolves while the heroine n Kevin were fighting the alpha plus make the system more presentable like make it a mystery

Icedragon69
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upload new chapters fast [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Sabaroth_zarkiel
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Hello author I wanted to know if there is ntr or Yuri in this novel ?

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