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Golden Cosmic System

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Lisez le roman Golden Cosmic System écrit par l'auteur EternaL_HeavenS publié sur WebNovel. Jiang Feitian was going home. He always love to spend his time walking, that was part of his hobby.Jiang Feitian would never thought that accident happens ! despite his age of 32 years old!He was give...

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Jiang Feitian was going home. He always love to spend his time walking, that was part of his hobby. Jiang Feitian would never thought that accident happens ! despite his age of 32 years old! He was given a chance, to an exciting experience and mind blowing secrets! What will our middle age man protagonist do!? Will he, embarked on cultivating and adventure!? What journey would that be? Let's accompany! our Little Feitian on his journey after possessing a body of Cultivator!

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Origin_Saint
Origin_SaintLv13Origin_Saint

This is very typical and predictable story with a dumb mc, the only thing is he has a realistic background. The mc behaves like a clueless dumb child, he somehow didn't think assimilating the memories of the body were necessary for two whole years. Also he's decision on leaving home was just out of character as most average humans wouldn't leave a safe zone without being sufficiently confident, he wasn't trained or anything, doesn't seem to have muscle memory and a lot of plot points seem very forced. Over used idea and mediocre execution. It's good that h ad the courage to write this, just try better next time.

SmallFries
SmallFriesLv4SmallFries

A 32 years old man of modern society transmigrates into a 32-years old man in eastern fantasy world? Interesting... In this world, humans are at the bottom of the food chain? Interesting. Packed with action and adventures? Count me in!

Dazzling_Verdict
Dazzling_VerdictLv2Dazzling_Verdict

I like the story from where is was going, any mistakes would not matter as long as the story line gets the point. I recommend this to everyone to read, you may learn some moves from the mc himself through imagination.

zd4zaasa
zd4zaasaLv1zd4zaasa

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Simphaty
SimphatyLv1Simphaty

I would like to read this. the story and the character are not bad either... but please before updating the chapter please check the Grammar.... but this is awesome.😍

SEP1A
SEP1ALv10SEP1A

This novel is a rollercoaster ride of just *BOOM*! The author chose a relatable main character which just made the book feel more intimate. Following along with all the motions and developments of this story was utterly enjoyable. I can tell a lot of thought and hard work went into crafting this - I commented my only transgression in the first chapter. This book is now vaulted in my library and I cannot wait to hear what this amazing author has to say about my own work!

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