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Evolution of the Strongest Avatar

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What is Evolution of the Strongest Avatar

Lisez le roman Evolution of the Strongest Avatar écrit par l'auteur FavourEkele_1969 publié sur WebNovel. 1chs >2 Power Stones 1 chapter >1k wordsDifferent genres will be introduced on each volume... Guy Thomson is a shrewd man in his mid-twenties struggling with his finances in Oregon, although born to ...

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1chs >2 Power Stones 1 chapter >1k words Different genres will be introduced on each volume... Guy Thomson is a shrewd man in his mid-twenties struggling with his finances in Oregon, although born to a rich family. He is considered an embarrassment. He is a gifted gamer but has nothing to lose, when a tempting offer on M-Tech pops up with a mouth-watering prize of USD 25 million, he takes the chance to change his life but he doesn't know that his life may also change for the worst... +Romance_Yes I said Romance +Action +RPG +VR +NPC

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Kota_Sama
Kota_SamaLv11Kota_Sama

Writing Quality: Honestly Good and captures everything very well. Story development: Plot is very interesting and the beginning I've read so far is very well done. Character Design: Amazing so far! Updating Stability: Seems good to me and has 30+chapters already! World Background seems fantastic as well!!!

Savage_writer
Savage_writerLv11Savage_writer

The concept of the story hooked, the character development of MC will be fun to read and thrilling romance..is what I want..❤️❤️💓💓💓 looking forward for more chàpters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Sunus_Writes
Sunus_WritesLv2Sunus_Writes

Reading your book is like a trip I am willing to take once,twice and again. The development of the story from the initial chapter is absolutely beautiful and I can't wait to read more. Guy is a character with a promising feats. I love the updating stability.

RRMenon
RRMenonLv1RRMenon

I have a habit of noting down Pros and Cons when I give a book review. So starting with the Pros: I definitely feel there is an interesting plot here. I was curious to see where the main storyline actually began. You have written a good summary as well. It made me want to read on to get to the actual plot of the book. I feel you have good setup for your lead character for his eventual character growth. Guy is at this worst point and struggles with his current lifestyle. It gave me the impression that he'll eventually grow out of that and I was intrigued as to find out how he would do so. Now for the cons: There are a large number of grammar and punctuation mistakes throughout your book. It was almost jarring to read some of the setences because of this. You have also used many words incorrectly. I found several instances where you have used certain words which have a completely different meaning that what you intended. I would strongly suggest to recheck your earlier chapters because the mistakes there are quite vast. Lastly, I found the first 4 chapters to be very slow. Not much happens. I understand you were trying to show the readers that Guy is living in very bad conditions but honestly, it's been dragged on way too long. I was looking forward to get to the actual plot but it was chapter after chapter of Guy hating his life. Felt unnecessary. Overall I feel the amounts of mistakes I found definitely hindered the experience for me. I do believe this story could be very interesting, judging by the summary. I wish there was more focus on the plot and less dragged out descriptions of Guy's lifestyle. I wish you all the best because you have potential for improvement. I'd really like to give it another read once you've made a couple of changes.

Darkvirus_18
Darkvirus_18Lv3Darkvirus_18

Brilliant use of words in describing the character. It will be fun to see how the MC transforms from his miserable life and see him achieve his goals. Keep up the good work, author🙂🙂

Holly_Marie_Brewer
Holly_Marie_BrewerLv1Holly_Marie_Brewer

I have read the first chapter and it gripped me! I am excited to continue reading and following the story! Love romance stories! [img=recommend]

Ken_Kaneki_UWU
Ken_Kaneki_UWULv2Ken_Kaneki_UWU

Noice

DaoistMMzDIR
DaoistMMzDIRLv3DaoistMMzDIR

your storytelling is absolutely awesome I was enjoying reading it, it's well detail and I loved how your description waiting for more good work

LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKLv11LORDOFORIGINALINK

Great grammar and description although it isn’ my cup of tea it is definitely a great novel with some potential it’s kinda a cliche but that doesn’t lessen it potential in any way I hope the author doesn’t ruin it Keep it up

Annie_Rose_Tee
Annie_Rose_TeeLv1Annie_Rose_Tee

Whoah! Excellent grammar! what a good way to start reading 🤩🤩🤩. Very interesting and the more you read, the more you get hooked. Keep up the good work, Sir.

Yassybella
YassybellaLv3Yassybella

Just a pretty entertaining read, and I was hooked by it for a while with its excellent grammar, like a professional writer for a long time. Worth reading, which is good for some who likes action and thrill.

Jude_K_1656
Jude_K_1656Lv10Jude_K_1656

I've never been impressed until I read this author's excellent plot on top. I was hooked the minute I started perusing the lines of the story. Guys, it's a great read to entertain your eyes, Worth reading!

Ariel_x
Ariel_xLv3Ariel_x

I like the enthusiasm I felt from reading the synopsis. I could already sense the adventures in depth. A little spice here and there and a perfect book is birthed. Good job author!

PRO_GAMER_2345
PRO_GAMER_2345Lv3PRO_GAMER_2345

A well written book, while details albeit a little slow, they are there. Has enough potential to come higher unto the rankings however a little more description of the characters and a better world description woukd make it perfect along with it's in the mark dialogues.

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