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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Queen Vegeta stretched her muscles as she entered the gym with Broly, rubbing her belly happily.

She was still angry about what he had said to her but the meal she had was the best of her life.

She was unable to give anything but a warm smile as the taste of the food still lingered in her mouth causing her to salivate and reminisce.

'Even though he's a bit rude, his cooking skills are godlike, he could be crazy and I would still get with him if he could cook like that,' she concluded.

Free meals like that every day?

It wasn't even a question.

"Here it is!" Broly said, turning around to face Queen Vegeta.

"It's not that-"

Queen Vegeta suddenly stopped speaking.

A strong heavy force weighed down on her body, trying to press her into the ground. She was caught off guard but quickly resisted, trying not to collapse under the harsh air.

Broly moved quickly, suddenly realising Queen Vegeta wasn't used to the gravity and leapt towards the switch flipping it smoothly.

Queen Vegeta breathed heavily.

If Broly was even a second late Queen Vegeta would have either been pushed into the ground or had her muscles tear apart under the intense strain.

"What the fuck was that?" she cried, still bent over, panting.

Broly scratched the side of his head.

"S-Sorry about that, I train under increased gravity," Broly said slowly.

"Are you trying to kill yourself?" Queen Vegeta said, eventually gaining control of her breath.

Broly chuckled wryly, not even knowing how to respond.

'He was actually able to stand in these conditions? Training like this should be impossible!'

Queen didn't even know of a Saiyan who could survive this torturous atmosphere.

'He couldn't have been telling the truth, right?'

Queen Vegeta briefly considered Broly's power level actually being sixteen million but she dismissed that train of thought, refusing to believe it.

'I'll just have to see for myself!' Queen Vegeta concluded.

"Let's spar," Queen Vegeta said, looking Broly in his eyes.

"Uh! B-But you're still wearing my T-shirt," Broly said, pointing at her curvy figure.

"I can take it off if you want," Queen Vegeta said, her face completely straight.

"N-No! You don't have to-"

"It's fine," Queen Vegeta said, hooking her thumbs under the shirt.

Broly squealed quietly as he covered his eyes with his hands.

'You're a child! You hear me? A child!' Yami said vindictively to Broly.

A few seconds passed and he peeked out, seeing Queen Vegeta's body wrapped with bandages.

"They're washable," Queen Vegeta said, slightly pleased with Broly's reaction.

"I-I see," Broly said to regain his composure.

Queen Vegeta breathed in and out, feeling her heart that was already pumping.

"Hmph!"

Pearly white ki surfaced to the front of her skin as she entered her battle stance.

Broly stared mesmerised at her appearance as the energy around her body only made her slim body stand out more.

'Broly is a bigger Saiyan and so his strength is always going to be greater than his speed, I'll use my agility to wear him out and then attack him when he's tired'

Queen Vegeta blinked and she already had a plan.

Without hesitating, she jumped forward towards Broly.

'Already?'

Broly watched Queen Vegeta jump towards him, quickly realising that all of her movements were very honest and straightforward in his eyes.

Broly had plenty of experience dealing with jumping opponents and reeled his arm back, patiently waiting for Queen Vegeta to enter his range.

'He's going to be aggressive, as I thought'

Broly threw his arm forward, going at max speed without using any of his ki.

'So fast!'

Queen Vegeta felt the wind brush past her face as Broly's fist was just a millimetre off.

PSH!

Broly's fist struck air causing a soft current to slap the wall opposite him.

Queen Vegeta thought quickly, she was close to Broly who was still in recovery from his attack so if she wanted to gain an early lead now was her chance.

She moved her leg behind Broly and reached for his neck in order to force him down.

Broly felt Queen Vegeta's leg touch his and knew what was going to happen, while his arms were in recovery his legs weren't.

He jumped forward connecting his knee to Queen Vegeta's face knocking her back.

'What the fuck are you doing! Her face is at least 9.8 out of 10! Why are you shooting yourself in the foot?' Yami scolded harshly.

Queen Vegeta's feet slid on the floor as she regained her balance.

'He's faster than I thought but it's not impossible'

Broly stared at Queen Vegeta focused, Queen Vegeta was very slippery and he wanted to hone his rushdown techniques as well as his defence.

Queen Vegeta ran up to Broly, quickly swinging her fist at his chest.

Broly moved his arm late and blocked low, his chunky arm only able to block due to its size.

Queen Vegeta followed up with another punch but this time Broly caught it like paper catching rock.

Queen Vegeta continued to swing, throwing jabs and hooks at Broly who caught all of them with little to no effort, quickly recognising her patterns and habits when striking.

Queen Vegeta grunted dissatisfied and tried to do Broly's favourite move, a spinning leg kick to the side of the head.

Broly smiled and dashed back, allowing Queen Vegeta's leg to meet air.

'Look at that ass!' Yami called out, watching Queen Vegeta's leg swing.

'Broly...you have to! For my sake! You have to!' Yami begged, causing Broly to snicker.

'Shit!' Queen Vegeta thought, realising that she had opened herself for an attack. She watched Broly panickedly only to realise that he was standing there, patiently waiting for her to attack again.

Her pride was hurt but she didn't say anything instead charging her ki and delivering a sudden superman punch to Broly's face.

A thudding sound echoed out.

'It's like metal!'

'Why the face?' Broly thought, not getting why people kept targeting his cheekbones.

Although Queen Vegeta had twisted her body, trying to generate as much power as she could, Broly didn't even flinch under the attack.

"You hit me," Broly said quietly, signalling for the spar to end.

Queen Vegeta was appalled.

Broly's endgame was just being hit? He didn't even bother fighting back!

Queen Vegeta's face fell and dashed backwards now charging her ki to the max.

'You've pissed her off!' Yami said, enjoying the show.

'Huh? How?!'

'Figure it out, genius! She's coming!'

Broly watched as pearly white ki rose from Queen Vegeta's body in even greater quantities, her muscles tensing menacingly. As if she was about to break out into a sprint she charged Broly, rushing towards him preparing for a collision.

'Is she trying to body tackle me?'

Broly wasn't quite sure what he was seeing but Queen Vegeta did, in fact, try to tackle him.

'Let her try! I want to see how this turns out,' Yami said, already aware of the outcome.

'Ah, ok,' Broly responded obediently.

Queen Vegeta went low pushing off the ground and wrapping her arms around Broly's waist pushing him into the air.

Broly leaned forward shifting his weight so that Queen Vegeta would buckle, carrying his heavy body. This way he could roll forward and power slam Queen Vegeta.

Queen Vegeta's feet landed awkwardly on the ground causing her to lose her balance and fall backwards.

Broly's face was pushed forwards, pressing against Queen Vegeta's soft-toned backside. Before he could speak, Broly's head approached the floor, quickly smacking into it, disorienting him slightly. His body lost tension and his full weight pulled Queen Vegeta back whose muscles were burning to lift Broly.

'He's too heavy!'

She fell backwards.

DOOSH!

Broly's large body collided with the ground.

Queen Vegeta sat upright confusedly.

"MMMMFFFFFF!"

She felt a very hot and warm sensation underneath her, belated realising she was sitting on Broly's face.

'Good shit!' Yami called out.

[Storyteller: Yami already said it]

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