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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Mr Yellow Mark 3 (52)

"Don't you feel bad for destroying all of this greenery?"

"I'll just sprinkle some Spade Formula and it will all grow back"

"Huh, technology has come far,"

"Yep"

"This less-like a spaceship and more like a space-house, no a Spacemansion,"

"Where's your Spacemansion?"

"I'm gonna steal yours," Mr Yellow said laughing maniacally.

"You wish you could," Broly smirked.

Broly and Mr Yellow exchanged banter as Broly telekinetically moved a huge 90-acre metal sheet that was an acre thick over the Tuffle City, casting a huge black shadow onto the land.

"How did they even package this?"

"Capsule Cubes"

"Ah!"

Broly reached the other Island and gently threw the metal square above him, the huge flat surface ripping air as it soared. Gravity responded soon and the huge piece began to fall, a sharp whistling sound produced as it dropped.

"Now isn't that scary," Mr Yellow said as just over half the Island was suddenly thrown into darkness.

Broly opened his palm and a small green ki orb flew high into the sky, rapidly expanding and soon collided with the metal.

Mr Yellow closed his eyes and covered his ears.

"It's not going to explode"

"Just in case"

"Hmph!"

Broly felt his ki soak into the metal, roughly 15% being completely absorbed and unremovable unless he wanted to break the huge surface. Broly breathed in and out, concentrating hard.

He only had one opportunity to get this right so he gathered every ounce focus within his will and concentrated.

He couldn't get this wrong.

Mr Yellow watched in awe as the massive chunk of flat metal was slowly but carefully bent in many places to form the exterior of a spaceship while streams of green smoke wafted away.

"It looks just like it," Mr yellow sound astounded.

"Well we used the Supercomputer to simulate the fluctuation of my ki waves, I simply copied what I saw, it wasn't-"

"No, I mean exactly like it! You sure you don't have a photographic memory?"

"It wasn't a photograph it was a simulation, idiot,"

"That's the last piece of praise I'll ever give you,"

Broly chuckled, this was a ki technique he had learned, his father taught him telekinesis so he decided to take it one step further.

Broly created lots of micro-explosions within his ki and used the force from the explosions to compress the metal into the shape he wanted while the smoke diffused outside.

He had purchased a Tsufurian Supercomputer off Skynet and while he would program it into his ship later, he used it to simulate how much force and where he would apply it to the metal to get the exterior he needed.

"The hardest part is now over so we can finally get started," Dr Yellow said, shooting capsule cubes out of his arms.

"Since you wanted to add blaster arms to the ship, I already made the beta version for my arms," he continued.

"I'm not mad at it," Broly said, slightly impressed.

Broly and Mr Yellow continued to spend the next few months working on the Robotic Spaceship, often sending pictures and discussing progress with the rest of the robotics department as this was technically a department development although Broly worked alone.

It was hard work especially for two people but Broly welcomed the challenge, at times he would have to rotate and manoeuvre the entire ship at once and often carried heavy metal pieces to and from the ship before it was fully completed, he had substituted his gym routines with this kind of manual labour.

"This is harder than I thought," Broly said, moving a large metal piece with his hands.

The first problem Broly encountered was creating a viable ecosystem. In the vast unforgiving void of space, there was no air to breathe or place for his breath to go. Furthermore, he needed to establish a cycle that would allow him to obtain fresh water and sustain optimal temperatures. Then he needed to build a hunk of metal around it that was able to fold and transform in ways a ship should not be able to fold and transform.

"It's possible in theory, there are metals that have the elastic properties and malleability to help you build what you want but even by Tsufurian standards this is extremely difficult, you're not going to have a fun time making it"

Dr Limiter's words were an understatement.

Broly now understood why Dr Barrel had never declined his requests for more resources.

He was waiting to see Broly fail.

Broly didn't mind it though, as he knew the main issue with the ship, Broly wanted his ship to be able to do everything at once.

He wanted it to have extendable weapons, an electronic information library, long-distance travel capacity, navigation capabilities, utility capabilities, recreational capabilities etc.

A normal person would have built several ships that were specialised in one thing but Broly wanted to cram as many things he could into one as possible.

Dr Limiter also pointed out his ship would be a bottomless pit as far as energy consumption was concerned, he would need some way to power the thing for long term use if he was serious.

So Broly used his ki.

If Broly learned anything from the incident that happened at the Tournament it was that his ki was a rapidly generating, ultra-powerful energy source so he had installed various 'Drainage points' where he could empty his ki into the ship and various mechanisms and processes would use it to make the ship run.

Broly, however, had massively underestimated the size of his ship.

Broly planned to have two floors in his ship, the lower layer where the navigation system, weapon systems and research systems were and upper layer where the recreational things and living quarters were.

This initial blueprint had Mr Yellow sitting at around 120 Acres of space (surface area). Upon developing the ship and welding the parts himself, he quickly realised this format wouldn't work. This would be because the interior of the ship had to be built in order to maintain a hospitable pressure otherwise the ship could burst mid-air and anyone on it would die.

This led the average 120 acres to become a huge 180 acres in size. The puny aircraft hangar Broly was working in was unable to house this kind of ridiculous machinery so Broly had cleared out a massive section on the other island to continue his work.

Four months later Broly finished his spaceship.

[Narrator: Amazing! After several all-nighters, the product of Broly's blood sweat and tears has been manifested! But how will the Tsufurians, a technology crazed race, react to his unique design? Find out in the next chapter of Dragon Ball Revised!]

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