I understand what you guys saying Im adding unnecessary villian but I really don't care. I want to try create them. The reason why world might be gett harder might because I place a f**king god on the hero side. Feel sorry for the villian.
Plus I have an idea on rewriting it so it have a better progress on his ability and relationships. I might rewrite or continue with this one. Time might tell.
Things seem a bit rush when I re read it.
Plus I'm a novice writer with serious grammar problem .