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Desire of Immortality (Harry Potter AU)

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Lisez le roman Desire of Immortality (Harry Potter AU) écrit par l'auteur Tenzing_Choeying_5139 publié sur WebNovel. When a ruthless CEO gets run over by truck kun, he wakes up as a new person. He was now Tiberius Black, the son of Sirius Black and Amelia Bones. He was neglected by both his parents, but he didn't ca...

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When a ruthless CEO gets run over by truck kun, he wakes up as a new person. He was now Tiberius Black, the son of Sirius Black and Amelia Bones. He was neglected by both his parents, but he didn't care as he saw no use for them. This is the story of a man's greed for power and Eternal Life.

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Giga_Weeb
Giga_WeebLv2Giga_Weeb

It goes for a good AU setting, but then immediately falls apart with plot holes (if his parents dont like arcturus why leave him with him etc.). Could've been good but the author cannot go a full half chapter without randomly dropping a line that shatters the HP worldbuilding and rules. like magic abilities that dont use magic, wands having infinite magic, 2 stones, insane permanent power ups that canonically AU or not should've needed a massive dark ritual from 'putting magic through your arm.'

Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv2Sagvey_Ay

do you feel the darkness too, child ??:)!! no, I am the darkness[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

Spectre_1919
Spectre_1919Lv14Spectre_1919

It has got a good plot but the way it is written makes it feel rushed and it doesn’t go into very many details.

Gurnoor_Singh_4533
Gurnoor_Singh_4533Lv4Gurnoor_Singh_4533

Hey Author :: Its been a while . How about U Write a New one In Marvel verse ??

Deimesu
DeimesuLv4Deimesu

I'm going to be honest. I can't stand the "villain" mc that doesn't have a reason to be one. But I don't wanna ruin the rating.

ken_uchiha
ken_uchihaLv4ken_uchiha

ok I like the AU but to much forced plot

Rysian
RysianLv13Rysian

Fast but good ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Matz_Herman
Matz_HermanLv1Matz_Herman

The score is surprisingly low, there are 2 factors I value the most here. Evil MC and plot without unnecessary details, in fact, those who have already read several Harry Potter fanfictions will see the same thing in others and it is unpleasant, so I like the way the author acted here, there is a point without water and this is enough.

IntheDarkness
IntheDarknessLv1IntheDarkness

Gerçekten çok iyiydi. Kısa sürede okudum. Gerçekten sürükelyic bir olay örgüsüydü. İlk başta onunda diğer salak, kendi kendine boş yere kötü adam diyen ana karakter olacağını sanmıştım ama gerçek bir kötü adamdı. Yazarı çok tebrik ediyorum. Emeklerine sağlık. 🙏🙏

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

Well... thanks for the chapter, but, author name is? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Aziraphale
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good job

Vaneford
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