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"How are you feeling now?" he ask, his breath allover her neck as he is too close. She close her eyes breathing so heavily, gulping down nothing and tighten the grip on her Saree. She only felt the heat of his voice but didn't hear the sound so neglecting his question wasn't intentional Abhishek stare at the beauty in front of him through the mirror, he is lost in those eyes, those memorising eyes even though he is only staring at them through the mirror He wanted to hold himself back but his feelings wouldn't let him, so he cautiously kiss the back of her neck. Lakshmi gasp and flap her eyes open her heavy breathing not ceasing "I ask you a question" his voice came up in-between the kiss on her neck "I..I..." Lakshmi pause as she can feel his kissing traveling round her neck and shoulder. He slowly turn her to face him and get the clear view of her beautiful face, those feelings are burning inside him but he can't explain what they are He trace his fingers on her smooth cheek, the thrilling feelings made Lakshmi to close her eyes. He stare down at those pink soft lips begging him to taste them, they are so tempting that he couldn't control himself And not thinking twice he took her lips immediately, he softly slide his tongue into her mouth sucking the sweetness. Lakshmi unconsciously gave in to the kiss as she welcome the thickly feeling of esctacy Abhishek being so hungry of that lips devours them as an angry lion, he made his tongue wobble in her mouth and she let out a soft moan, he can't get enough of her even though he deepen the kiss... he needs something else, something to calm this burning feelings in him. She wrap her hand round his shoulder and that give him access to draw her more closer to himself as his hand rested on her bare back, his fingers touch her wound and the pain from it got her back from reality She quickly open her eyes and withdraw from the kissing, her heart beating so heavily, she gulp down trying to calm her heavy breathing, what is wrong with her... this is the second time she is giving in to his kiss and that makes her angry, no man has the right to kiss her if not Abhijit She felt Abhishek eyes on her, she twist her fingers nervously staring at the floor... one can hear the beating of her heart. Abhishek has the right to have her now since the kiss has awaken something in him but what is stopping him. He doesn't want to force her, that still doesn't make sense... She must not comply for him to have her, why is he so different towards her Lakshmi eyes keep staring at the floor, she didn't have the courage to look him in the eye, she prays he won't force her cos she is not ready. She will never even be ready because her heart belongs to someone else Abhishek stare at her for a minute and that was the longest minute in Lakshmi's life, the room was dead silent as the the only thing that could be heard is the beating of Lakshmi's heart "I will have someone bring an ointment for you, it will help heal the wound fast and leave no scar" he speak up after a long silent, he stare once more at her before leaving the room Lakshmi was able to let out the breath she has been holding all this while, what is taking preeta for long, she really need water at this point to calm herself What is wrong with her, she shouldn't feel that way about him... no she shouldn't, she loves Abhijit and will love no one else except him. She sits at the edge of her bed as she hold her beating heart

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Is this review biased? Of course, I’m the author after all. Is it true? Depends on the standards that we set. Taking into account the average quality of novels on this site though, I dare say that this rating is not overly exaggerated. Beside pointing out the obvious, this review serves another, perhaps an even more important, purpose, and that is to outline some key characteristics of the characters and the world that I plan to build which were not included in the synopsys (which I initially made as a joke). I will begin by saying that this novel is a little unconventional in the sense that it will not follow standard transmigration and system storylines where the protagonist is born with a hundred golden spoons up his rear hole and where every girl jumps him just to have a taste; on the contrary, I believe that you dont need a silver fork to eat good food. Don’t get me wrong, the main character will have a silver spoon to begin with, but upon closer inspection no other golden cutlery will be found. I will attempt to make the main character realistic and intelligent and that pertains that there will be no harems, girls won’t jump him at sight and he will not help little lolis just because they are cute. Character development is, of course, planned, so don’t expect him to be a ruthless killer from chapter one. Now onto the world. I do plan to change the setting as the novel progresses, but at the moment what we have is the standard medieval world with flying lizards, talking oysters and other rediculous sh1… phenomena. I can’t and won’t promise a regular release schedule, nor will I assert that the story won’t be dropped half way, but for now I do sincerely hope that you will find it at least somewhat enjoyable :/

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I liked this work it has potential for me I will save it in the library and wait for more hahahhahahahaahahahahhahaha

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